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04-14-2012, 02:08 AM - 1 Like   #1
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Kheyyy...

An attempt to glamor.
Model: Agnieszka, make up: Wera.
The light from the window



04-14-2012, 02:19 AM   #2
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I like it a lot, especially the use of natural light, the green background to the red hair, and the quirky headgear. She is a lovely model too.

Only one criticism (and it's only marginal); to my eyes, the angle is a tiny bit low. There is just a little too much jaw (fine jaw as it is), and her (rather cute) upturned nose is obscuring her left eye a little too much for my liking.

Nice work.
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Engaging image. What message is she trying to communicate? Ambiguous at best.
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I think it would have been better if the model had angled her head downward, looking up someones nose is not very appealing.

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Here eyes are too closed and the nose should not be shot to where it's profile runs into the far eye.
04-24-2012, 03:08 PM   #6
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Version with head bowed.
But personally I prefer the first version.

04-24-2012, 04:30 PM   #7
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I prefer the first version as well.

To me if says something (which I'll withhold as to not plant any ideas) more than this last photo you have posted.

There's also something about the lines of the first that are not there with the second shot.

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So do I. Although I like her eyes and the mole on her top lip in this one, it looks a bit flat. The first one only needed a tiny change in angle to really make it pop. The focal plane also looks shallower in the first, which makes the hair and head-dress look more interesting.
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