People Ginger

Michu · 05-18-2012, 05:35 AM - **1 Like**

Kheyyy...

Model Karolina, ambient light, Fujicolor 200 film, favorite Ltd 43, park at the palace in Brody.
The session made the occasion of PPD (Polish Pentax Days).

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02.

**MSL** · 05-18-2012, 06:07 AM

Interesting poses and her hair makes for a wild color contrast, but I feel like you are too far away from the subject and she doesn't fill enough of the frame. She also has very patchy light/shadows on her in the second picture which are distracting.

eddie1960 · 05-18-2012, 06:21 AM

I agree you could be in a little tighter but I actually like the mottled shadows in the second shot

tackyat.2 · 05-18-2012, 07:17 PM

The second one works because of the way that the light falls -- it sort of leads to her. It also gives her contrast from the background, though only slight.

The colors are quite interesting.

**MSL** · 05-19-2012, 07:48 PM

Okay, okay, I'll partially retract my comments about the mottled lighting. I guess the one bit that bugged me and lead to the comment was what appears to be a blown highlight on her left arm. Otherwise I agree that it is an interesting way to light the model and will attract the eye to her.

MSM · 05-19-2012, 09:49 PM

I agree on needing to crop tighter. I would love to see the first image cropped in to reduce the presence of the right (larger) tree. The size of the tree with its branches lead my eyes out of the picture. I would keep the branch that runs over the model's head as it is a nice frame.

Michu · 05-25-2012, 11:38 PM

Thanks for your feedback and comments.
This time Ilford HP5, continues Ltd 43

03.

twitch · 05-28-2012, 02:10 AM

I like 01 and 03 a lot.

05-18-2012, 05:35 AM - 1 Like	#1
Michu Forum Member Join Date: Dec 2010 Location: Bydgoszcz Posts: 59	Ginger Lens: Ltd 43 Camera: MZ-6 Photo Location: Brody ISO: 200 Kheyyy... Model Karolina, ambient light, Fujicolor 200 film, favorite Ltd 43, park at the palace in Brody. The session made the occasion of PPD (Polish Pentax Days). 01. 02.

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05-18-2012, 06:07 AM	#2
MSL Site Supporter Join Date: Feb 2012 Location: Greater Toronto Area Photos: Gallery \| Albums Posts: 4,749	Interesting poses and her hair makes for a wild color contrast, but I feel like you are too far away from the subject and she doesn't fill enough of the frame. She also has very patchy light/shadows on her in the second picture which are distracting.

05-18-2012, 06:21 AM	#3
eddie1960 Veteran Member Join Date: Aug 2010 Location: Toronto Photos: Gallery \| Albums Posts: 13,666	I agree you could be in a little tighter but I actually like the mottled shadows in the second shot

05-18-2012, 07:17 PM	#4
tackyat.2 Senior Member Join Date: Sep 2010 Location: New York Photos: Gallery Posts: 181	The second one works because of the way that the light falls -- it sort of leads to her. It also gives her contrast from the background, though only slight. The colors are quite interesting.

05-19-2012, 07:48 PM	#5
MSL Site Supporter Join Date: Feb 2012 Location: Greater Toronto Area Photos: Gallery \| Albums Posts: 4,749	Okay, okay, I'll partially retract my comments about the mottled lighting. I guess the one bit that bugged me and lead to the comment was what appears to be a blown highlight on her left arm. Otherwise I agree that it is an interesting way to light the model and will attract the eye to her.

05-19-2012, 09:49 PM	#6
MSM Veteran Member Join Date: Dec 2007 Location: Alabama Photos: Gallery Posts: 994	I agree on needing to crop tighter. I would love to see the first image cropped in to reduce the presence of the right (larger) tree. The size of the tree with its branches lead my eyes out of the picture. I would keep the branch that runs over the model's head as it is a nice frame.

05-25-2012, 11:38 PM	#7
Michu Forum Member Join Date: Dec 2010 Location: Bydgoszcz Posts: 59 Original Poster	Thanks for your feedback and comments. This time Ilford HP5, continues Ltd 43 03.

05-28-2012, 02:10 AM	#8
twitch Veteran Member Join Date: Nov 2009 Posts: 4,571	I like 01 and 03 a lot.

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