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06-20-2012, 01:32 AM   #1
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Lens: Sigma 18-50 / 2,8-4,5 Camera: Pentax K10D Photo Location: Umag ; Croatia ISO: 200 Shutter Speed: 1/15s Aperture: F3.5 

Promenade in a small Mediterranean town.



06-20-2012, 10:07 PM   #2
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My opinion hard to fault. Nice depth of field fotr the settings. Nice pic.
06-21-2012, 07:26 PM   #3
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Respectfully, sir:
• I'm having trouble finding an area that's sharply in focus — unless perhaps it is the first few rows of paving material.
• The photo appears to be tilted a bit to the left.
• I like the color and your choice of subject.
I enjoy seeing your photographs.
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Hi,
Thank you for your attention and comments.
Stu!; Due to the low light focus (18), I was forced to correct the distortion and thus all the "conductor" frame. The stone slab streets really little more to the left (due to water runoff meteornih).
The point of focus? Hm, hm ...! The camera itself requires the most bright spots, especially if I continued to Metering Mode: Pattern. I think the focus is, above right, with the most illuminated panels?
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I wish you had included the entire ice cream cone.

Also, your lens is likely sharper (and less distorted) at least one stop from wide open - in this case, F5.6 and ISO 400 may have given a more pleasing result at /15th.

Regarding focus, I would set the focus point manually, it should show as a red dot in the viewfinder. That is something you must control in order to predict the result of the photo!
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If you would have taken about 2 or 3 steps sideways to your left and used that vantage point... your "line" on the right could have created even more or better DOF.
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