People Joanna

Michu · 08-18-2012, 04:55 AM - **1 Like**

Kheyyy...

Joanna, flash with an umbrella...

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Gregory_51 · 08-18-2012, 05:40 AM

Hello
Well done, good poses and processing. A couple of minor points. Number one I find a little claustrophobic. Personally I'd like to see just a touch more space around the subject. On number two there are CA's along the right edge of the dress and I'd have positioned the subject just a tiny bit further to the left and have a slight bit more space on the right instead of having her right in the middle of the frame.
Cheers

tackyat.2 · 08-20-2012, 03:54 PM

First thing that hits me is the quality of the light -- very nice.

I like 01. Good pose, high quality lighting.

02 definitely needs that CA removed or at least reduced.

I don't know how to feel about 03. Though I could imagine that she's my mother and scolding me with those eyes.

04 is a very nice B&W conversion and emphasizes the light, which is good. I don't know about that pose, but it sure is interesting!
I could stare at it for a while, attempting to unravel it's secret.

All in all, interesting set.

Jools · 08-20-2012, 04:28 PM

Delightful images
I really like the first one. It really shines.
Beautiful model and light.

K-9 · 08-21-2012, 06:54 PM

The white light behind her is distracting in the first shot. I don't like the underexposed face in shot 3. The last pose is awkward and her fingers look oddly placed. She is a very nice choice of model that I am sure you can get a lot out of.

Ponosby Britt · 08-21-2012, 09:13 PM

Maybe like this. It eliminates the distraction of the bright lights and hands ( which are as big as peoples faces) and puts all the attention on her

08-18-2012, 04:55 AM - 1 Like	#1
Michu Forum Member Join Date: Dec 2010 Location: Bydgoszcz Posts: 59	Joanna Camera: K-5 Photo Location: Poznan Kheyyy... Joanna, flash with an umbrella... 01. 02. 03. 04.

08-21-2012, 09:13 PM	#6
Ponosby Britt Closed Account Join Date: Jun 2012 Posts: 227	Maybe like this. It eliminates the distraction of the bright lights and hands ( which are as big as peoples faces) and puts all the attention on her Attached Images

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08-18-2012, 05:40 AM	#2
Gregory_51 Veteran Member Join Date: Jun 2011 Location: London, Canada Photos: Gallery Posts: 343	Hello Well done, good poses and processing. A couple of minor points. Number one I find a little claustrophobic. Personally I'd like to see just a touch more space around the subject. On number two there are CA's along the right edge of the dress and I'd have positioned the subject just a tiny bit further to the left and have a slight bit more space on the right instead of having her right in the middle of the frame. Cheers

08-20-2012, 03:54 PM	#3
tackyat.2 Senior Member Join Date: Sep 2010 Location: New York Photos: Gallery Posts: 181	First thing that hits me is the quality of the light -- very nice. I like 01. Good pose, high quality lighting. 02 definitely needs that CA removed or at least reduced. I don't know how to feel about 03. Though I could imagine that she's my mother and scolding me with those eyes. 04 is a very nice B&W conversion and emphasizes the light, which is good. I don't know about that pose, but it sure is interesting! I could stare at it for a while, attempting to unravel it's secret. All in all, interesting set.

08-20-2012, 04:28 PM	#4
Jools Veteran Member Join Date: Aug 2009 Location: SW Wisconsin by way of Venezuela Photos: Gallery \| Albums Posts: 1,398	Delightful images I really like the first one. It really shines. Beautiful model and light.

08-21-2012, 06:54 PM	#5
K-9 Veteran Member Join Date: May 2009 Location: USA Photos: Albums Posts: 1,971	The white light behind her is distracting in the first shot. I don't like the underexposed face in shot 3. The last pose is awkward and her fingers look oddly placed. She is a very nice choice of model that I am sure you can get a lot out of.