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10-28-2012, 03:39 AM   #1
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Afternoon delight.....
Lens: da 50mm Camera: K5 Photo Location: garden :) ISO: 400 Shutter Speed: 1/750s Aperture: F1.8 

A reward after some heavy gardening.......love spring
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10-28-2012, 04:00 AM   #2
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Very nicely composed, great photo
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Too much on top, a little cropping to draw eyes to subject, but the wine, flowers and bench is awesome. I like it, looks like a greeting card.
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Thanks guys......

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I agree with jcamero, there is too much empty space on top, otherwise excellent. As I'm posting this I just noticed that the champagne is very tilted in the glass (rather, the glass is probably tilted)... this brings a little inbalance to the image because intuitively liquids should be horizontal.
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Ha it is too! I had to straighten it but missed that bit! Just as well it is only practice
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I agree with a bit too much on top, and the liquid level.

The vast empty space is good if you were putting advertising copy there.
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a very nice shot, good lighting and contrast for the shot

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