People grandmother and granddaughter

vlatkoufo · 10-29-2012, 02:05 PM

grandmother and granddaughter

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VTerlakyPhoto · 10-29-2012, 07:02 PM

You captured a great touching moment here, well done! I think the image just needs a little more contrast and separation between foreground and background to give it depth and interest, otherwise I wouldn't touch a thing

asp1880 · 10-30-2012, 01:44 AM

A bit of sandwich critique:
I like the scene and timing of the capture, cute and heartwarming.
It looks bit front focused to me.
Interesting colour toning.

Regards,
--Anders.

Velja · 10-30-2012, 02:16 AM

Hi Vlatko,
composition, documenting the synergy of two generations is OK. The problem is probably arise in PP. I'm not sure what caused the unreal color palette, WB or color balance? For ease of analysis should have known and aperture, a program in which you did PP and what interests me personally in any format you shoot, RAW or JPEG?
best regards

vlatkoufo · 10-31-2012, 02:29 PM

i dont remember,hahah

vlatkoufo · 10-31-2012, 02:31 PM

no ,it was in RAW !

Gregory_51 · 11-01-2012, 10:16 AM

Hello
Good timing and framing of a cute moment. I agree with asp1880 it's a missed focus on the subjects, the grass in front is sharp but the subjects less so, you can probably do some selective sharpening on the people. As with any photo opinions will be all over the map some liking some aspect and others not, personally I find the color too garish and distracting. I would suggest trying it as a b&w, if you do you will see that the subjects jump out at you instead of the colors. As a final observation I would clone out that tall weed stem at the the front leading up to the little girl. This is a cute shot that can't be repeated so trying to tweak it is worth the effort.
Cheers
Greg

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10-29-2012, 07:02 PM	#2
VTerlakyPhoto Senior Member Join Date: Sep 2012 Photos: Gallery Posts: 107	You captured a great touching moment here, well done! I think the image just needs a little more contrast and separation between foreground and background to give it depth and interest, otherwise I wouldn't touch a thing

10-30-2012, 01:44 AM	#3
asp1880 Veteran Member Join Date: Jul 2010 Location: Lyngby, Copenhagen Photos: Albums Posts: 742	A bit of sandwich critique: I like the scene and timing of the capture, cute and heartwarming. It looks bit front focused to me. Interesting colour toning. Regards, --Anders.

10-30-2012, 02:16 AM	#4
Velja Veteran Member Join Date: Nov 2011 Location: Velenje Photos: Gallery \| Albums Posts: 554	Hi Vlatko, composition, documenting the synergy of two generations is OK. The problem is probably arise in PP. I'm not sure what caused the unreal color palette, WB or color balance? For ease of analysis should have known and aperture, a program in which you did PP and what interests me personally in any format you shoot, RAW or JPEG? best regards

10-31-2012, 02:29 PM	#5
vlatkoufo Inactive Account Join Date: Oct 2011 Location: skopje Photos: Gallery \| Albums Posts: 25 Original Poster	i dont remember,hahah

10-31-2012, 02:31 PM	#6
vlatkoufo Inactive Account Join Date: Oct 2011 Location: skopje Photos: Gallery \| Albums Posts: 25 Original Poster	no ,it was in RAW !

11-01-2012, 10:16 AM	#7
Gregory_51 Veteran Member Join Date: Jun 2011 Location: London, Canada Photos: Gallery Posts: 343	Hello Good timing and framing of a cute moment. I agree with asp1880 it's a missed focus on the subjects, the grass in front is sharp but the subjects less so, you can probably do some selective sharpening on the people. As with any photo opinions will be all over the map some liking some aspect and others not, personally I find the color too garish and distracting. I would suggest trying it as a b&w, if you do you will see that the subjects jump out at you instead of the colors. As a final observation I would clone out that tall weed stem at the the front leading up to the little girl. This is a cute shot that can't be repeated so trying to tweak it is worth the effort. Cheers Greg