Originally posted by Macario very nice portrait, I just don't like the background
I'll vote the opposite way, because it works well with her eye color.
Originally posted by Miguel 2. I would remove the few hairs that cross her neck on her left side.
I didn't notice them until they were pointed out, but I agree this would help.
Otherwise a very nice shot. There are elements that individually sort of bother me - the angle of her head, the centering of her head in the shot, but once put all together seem to work well in making this a different sort of portrait.