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jt1667 · 11-15-2012, 04:44 AM

Comments are welcome - thanks everyone.

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SpecialK · 11-15-2012, 08:31 PM

I like everything about it except...I'd crop off most of the bottom. It is a pretty long image, and the reflection really does not add anything and may detract from the other elements.

**BigDave** · 11-15-2012, 09:02 PM

I'd agree with Agent K about the bottom reflection, nice, but you do not need all of it. Give a bit more room at the top to space the emblem/patch from the edge of the frame more.

jt1667 · 11-16-2012, 01:46 AM

Thanks for the comments! To me the reflection of the badges was the 'cool' part of the picture. Its nice to get some feedback from a different sets of eyes. Ill have to give it a re-crop and see how it comes out.
Thanks

Gregory_51 · 11-17-2012, 07:36 PM

Hello
It is a very long skinny image which is somewhat dictated by the (glass ?) with the logo in the back. I rather like the reflection too even thought it contributes to the length of the image. If you are able to re shoot it I would suggest spacing the elements a little differently. If you place the badge and name tag a little further out towards the sides it would give a bit a triangle shape to the elements which might be more appealing and let name of the city show on the badge. I might put some light behind the glass to give some interest and separation from the background. I might also suggest a smaller aperture and/or a change in the point of focus so the name tag is in sharp focus too. Just my 2 cents.
Cheers
Greg

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11-15-2012, 08:31 PM	#2
SpecialK Pentaxian Join Date: Dec 2006 Location: So California Photos: Gallery Posts: 16,482	I like everything about it except...I'd crop off most of the bottom. It is a pretty long image, and the reflection really does not add anything and may detract from the other elements.

11-15-2012, 09:02 PM	#3
BigDave Site Supporter Join Date: Sep 2010 Location: Hudson Valley, NY Photos: Gallery \| Albums Posts: 2,626	I'd agree with Agent K about the bottom reflection, nice, but you do not need all of it. Give a bit more room at the top to space the emblem/patch from the edge of the frame more.

11-16-2012, 01:46 AM	#4
jt1667 Junior Member Join Date: Jan 2012 Posts: 35 Original Poster	Thanks for the comments! To me the reflection of the badges was the 'cool' part of the picture. Its nice to get some feedback from a different sets of eyes. Ill have to give it a re-crop and see how it comes out. Thanks

11-17-2012, 07:36 PM	#5
Gregory_51 Veteran Member Join Date: Jun 2011 Location: London, Canada Photos: Gallery Posts: 343	Hello It is a very long skinny image which is somewhat dictated by the (glass ?) with the logo in the back. I rather like the reflection too even thought it contributes to the length of the image. If you are able to re shoot it I would suggest spacing the elements a little differently. If you place the badge and name tag a little further out towards the sides it would give a bit a triangle shape to the elements which might be more appealing and let name of the city show on the badge. I might put some light behind the glass to give some interest and separation from the background. I might also suggest a smaller aperture and/or a change in the point of focus so the name tag is in sharp focus too. Just my 2 cents. Cheers Greg