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02-20-2008, 08:18 AM   #1
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Pentax K10D
smc Pentax-FA 50 mm f/1.4
1/1000
f/1.4
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Let me have it, I'm just starting out with anything outside of portraiture. I want to get better and I need your help for that.

SLC

02-24-2008, 09:41 AM   #2
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Clueless...

SLC,

I noticed that you haven't gotten any feedback on your picture yet.. but honestly it is really good... I dont know what you could do to improve it really.....

Thinking out loud...

1. Try a little more contrast or bring out the shadows a bit more??
2. Try sharpining the bubble and then maybe blurring the outside to give more fade...??
3. The blue is really pretty but there seems to be some green on the left side... maybe try to enhance that bit more... ??
4. The rock on the bottom right corner is a bit distracting if I had to pick on something. Blurring the into the rest of the picture may help it as well..

As I mentioned above.... this is a realy good pic already.. but if I was playin with it (and I am not expert by any means) what I mentioned is what I would personally start with..

Hope this helps.. Kim
02-26-2008, 10:42 AM   #3
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Thanks!

I've taken your suggestions down and will re-edit the photo soon. I'll re-post it when I get it done.

I appreciate the time you took to help me out.

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02-26-2008, 07:32 PM   #4
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Sweet!!!!

SWEET!!!! I will be anxiouse to see them... I hope atleast one of them works!!!!

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