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01-31-2013, 06:39 PM   #1
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Reflections from Yosemite
Lens: 18-55 kit lens Camera: K-5 Photo Location: Yosemite National Park ISO: 200 Shutter Speed: 1/60s Aperture: F8 

Hi All,

This is a photo from a recent trip to Yosemite. This was my first time shooting there in the winter and I had a great time. I like the picture but there is always room for improvement. Any suggestions?

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01-31-2013, 09:05 PM   #2
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Great shot! I am not sure how it could be improved, except possibly with some light PP to make the tree reflections on the water slightly lighter/colourful.

Thank you for sharing,
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Very serene. Typical Yosemite. Good reflection, composition, river leads the viewer into the image. Well done.
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When I commented on a photo you posted previously, I neglected to welcome you to Pentaxforums.

I agree that making the trees' reflections lighter and brighter could be beneficial unless you prefer to keep the current tone.

Best wishes.

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Thanks for the replies so far. Two votes for lightening the reflection, I can play around with that. Does anyone think the rock formation in the background is too washed out? Something about it bugs me a little but I cant put my finger on it.
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this one looks great - love the composition.
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