Landscape Wounded Nature 3

Velja · 02-18-2013, 02:46 AM - **1 Like**

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Hi,
attach two photo (the difference in the format). shot in time sunset (sun-white, left among the trees on the horizon).
-dots, right down to the day flies on the surface of the lake.
photo-aligned at the horizon, not by the chimney.
-PP, the photo "cleansed of UFO", contrasted, first cropped to 16:9, the central composition (I'm thinking it's the other, too much empty sky, not a famine of the third).
Your opinion?
greeting

jido · 02-18-2013, 03:16 AM

Which has central composition?

For this kind of picture I would give equal treatment to sky and water, or even show more water than sky. If you want to focus on the sky you need a more dull foreground ;-)

Velja · 02-19-2013, 05:29 AM

Hi,
Obviously you need to write a whole essay accompanying that photo would be easy to understand?
When visiting the exhibition, under the photos is just the name?
PS. Auditory must know, "read" exhibit!
greeting
Velimir

mrNewt · 02-19-2013, 08:25 AM

Is a well done photo from my point of view - has a very nice artistic quality to it.
Both images are good and choosing between them is a matter of preference.

jqsk · 02-22-2013, 12:07 AM

If you are going for a "wounded nature" look, I would endorse the first image; I quite prefer the subtle brown tones to the rather saturated oranges. Nice scene overall. I'd probably drive myself nuts editing out all the spots on the water...

Velja · 03-07-2013, 02:55 AM

Hi,
Thank you for your attention i constructive proposals (the one-day fruitflies). I have not "cleared" for the simple reason, without the lake surface, "pure desert"!
I attach cleared, for comparison?
greeting
Velja

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02-18-2013, 02:46 AM - 1 Like	#1
Velja Veteran Member Join Date: Nov 2011 Location: Velenje Photos: Gallery \| Albums Posts: 554	Wounded Nature 3 Lens: Tamton 18-250/3,5-6,3 Camera: Pentax K10D Photo Location: Velenje Lake;Slovenia ISO: 200 Shutter Speed: 1/60s Aperture: F4.5 1 2 Hi, attach two photo (the difference in the format). shot in time sunset (sun-white, left among the trees on the horizon). -dots, right down to the day flies on the surface of the lake. photo-aligned at the horizon, not by the chimney. -PP, the photo "cleansed of UFO", contrasted, first cropped to 16:9, the central composition (I'm thinking it's the other, too much empty sky, not a famine of the third). Your opinion? greeting

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02-18-2013, 03:16 AM	#2
jido Senior Member Join Date: Jan 2013 Photos: Gallery \| Albums Posts: 127	Which has central composition? For this kind of picture I would give equal treatment to sky and water, or even show more water than sky. If you want to focus on the sky you need a more dull foreground ;-)

02-19-2013, 05:29 AM	#3
Velja Veteran Member Join Date: Nov 2011 Location: Velenje Photos: Gallery \| Albums Posts: 554 Original Poster	Hi, Obviously you need to write a whole essay accompanying that photo would be easy to understand? When visiting the exhibition, under the photos is just the name? PS. Auditory must know, "read" exhibit! greeting Velimir

02-19-2013, 08:25 AM	#4
mrNewt Veteran Member Join Date: Nov 2011 Location: ON, RH Posts: 2,181	Is a well done photo from my point of view - has a very nice artistic quality to it. Both images are good and choosing between them is a matter of preference.

02-22-2013, 12:07 AM	#5
jqsk Forum Member Join Date: May 2010 Posts: 81	If you are going for a "wounded nature" look, I would endorse the first image; I quite prefer the subtle brown tones to the rather saturated oranges. Nice scene overall. I'd probably drive myself nuts editing out all the spots on the water...

03-07-2013, 02:55 AM	#6
Velja Veteran Member Join Date: Nov 2011 Location: Velenje Photos: Gallery \| Albums Posts: 554 Original Poster	Hi, Thank you for your attention i constructive proposals (the one-day fruitflies). I have not "cleared" for the simple reason, without the lake surface, "pure desert"! I attach cleared, for comparison? greeting Velja