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soalle · 03-06-2013, 04:49 AM

Gondola in Venice.

Comments are much appreciated!

Vasyl · 03-06-2013, 08:33 AM

As a variant...for me it is easier to make some changes than to say what can be done with yours...

Alliecat · 03-13-2013, 11:08 PM

I like it. One could nitpick about the white line in the doorway. The overall colour, & the bit of colour on the flowers, give it an abstracty arty feel. I want to go take pix in Venice...!
Sorry, the darkened variation just doesn't work for me. I find it too dark, & there isn't enough colour in the flowers for a "colour" shot & too much for it to be considered black & white.

**jbinpg** · 03-14-2013, 03:34 PM

The original looks as if you applied a cross-process treatment. I like it.

**Kerrowdown** · 03-14-2013, 04:58 PM

Yep like it, it's different view of Venice gondola and that's not an easy thing to do.

**ebahle** · 03-17-2013, 07:49 AM

Love everything about it. The texture of the wall with the smooth silky lines of the gondola. The two elements play very nicely together. Id be curious to see it cropped square and remove some of the empty space to the right. Then again it adds a nice element of balance to the pic. Your pic, your vision. Nicely done!

soalle · 03-24-2013, 08:23 AM

thank you all for the feedback!

the suggestion about the white line on the door is definitely a valid one!

03-06-2013, 04:49 AM	#1
soalle Senior Member Join Date: Feb 2008 Location: Italy -> Canada -> Belgium -> Switzerland Photos: Gallery Posts: 233	Prora Lens: Pentax 18-250mm Camera: Pentax k-30 Photo Location: Venice ISO: 200 Shutter Speed: 1/90s Aperture: F5.6 Gondola in Venice. Comments are much appreciated!

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03-06-2013, 08:33 AM	#2
Vasyl Veteran Member Join Date: Aug 2010 Photos: Gallery Posts: 648	As a variant...for me it is easier to make some changes than to say what can be done with yours...

03-13-2013, 11:08 PM	#3
Alliecat Veteran Member Join Date: Dec 2010 Location: East of Everywhere, Canada Posts: 740	I like it. One could nitpick about the white line in the doorway. The overall colour, & the bit of colour on the flowers, give it an abstracty arty feel. I want to go take pix in Venice...! Sorry, the darkened variation just doesn't work for me. I find it too dark, & there isn't enough colour in the flowers for a "colour" shot & too much for it to be considered black & white.

03-14-2013, 03:34 PM	#4
jbinpg Site Supporter Join Date: Mar 2008 Location: Prince George, BC Photos: Gallery \| Albums Posts: 3,546	The original looks as if you applied a cross-process treatment. I like it.

03-14-2013, 04:58 PM	#5
Kerrowdown PEG Moderator Join Date: Aug 2008 Location: Highlands of Scotland... "Hold Infinity in the palm of your hand" - William Blake Photos: Gallery Posts: 57,835	Yep like it, it's different view of Venice gondola and that's not an easy thing to do.

03-17-2013, 07:49 AM	#6
ebahle Site Supporter Join Date: Oct 2011 Location: Northern Michigan Photos: Albums Posts: 364	Love everything about it. The texture of the wall with the smooth silky lines of the gondola. The two elements play very nicely together. Id be curious to see it cropped square and remove some of the empty space to the right. Then again it adds a nice element of balance to the pic. Your pic, your vision. Nicely done!

03-24-2013, 08:23 AM	#7
soalle Senior Member Join Date: Feb 2008 Location: Italy -> Canada -> Belgium -> Switzerland Photos: Gallery Posts: 233 Original Poster	thank you all for the feedback! the suggestion about the white line on the door is definitely a valid one!