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Michu · 03-17-2013, 03:44 PM - **3 Likes**

Kheyyy...

Models: Olivia, ambient light, somewhere in northern Poland...

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**Kerrowdown** · 03-17-2013, 03:59 PM

Really like the second, beautiful even light, well done.

Na Horuk · 03-17-2013, 05:03 PM

Really lovely shots, especially the first one, reminds me of a painting

NewportPreacher · 03-17-2013, 05:15 PM

I think the second one is nearly perfect. The first is good, but I wonder if it would be more compelling with and bit more light in the shadows and/or cropped tighter on the top-left — my eye wants to see more of the model in that one. Still, that's a very subjective call and both of them are gorgeous photos.

Alliecat · 03-18-2013, 09:43 PM

I like both! The first in particular is very fairy-tale-princess-fantasy-movie -ish. Like it's out of a movie set. Lovely model, lovely outfit too.

CB Knipp · 03-18-2013, 09:46 PM

Great shots! The first looks for "fantasy" while the second I feel is stronger. Love the lighting and the green background works perfectly.

smf · 03-19-2013, 07:00 AM

Superb!

jnguyen · 03-19-2013, 03:07 PM

The second photo is beautiful.

What I like: #1. The image is sharp and well exposed. #2. The color of the dress complement the model. #3. The lace and embroidery evoke tradition and history.

What you can do to enhance the photo: #1. The right hand is hidden. I would like to see the model place her right hand on her left knee, for example. #2. The folds on the dress at the feet of the model should be straighten a little more to reveal the beautiful embroidery. #3. The green background complements the model and her dress. Unfortunately it ended. It created an imaginary line, cutting the model left hand. The changing background is distracting.

I look forward to seeing more of your beautiful and creative work.

normhead · 03-19-2013, 03:15 PM

Very nice work...while I wouldn't perhaps tell you what to do with her hands, as above, I would say the hand placement is probably the weakest part of the images, so, you got it 99% right.

**jac** · 03-19-2013, 03:44 PM

Aw heck, if I could get as far as you got, I'd be very pleased with myself. Great work!

bezuidar · 03-19-2013, 10:07 PM

First picture looks like she is a live.....very well done.

CB Knipp · 03-19-2013, 10:11 PM

Originally posted by bezuidar

First picture looks like she is a live

I sure hope she is! I do not wish to witness a crime here on the forums...

**Ash** · 03-19-2013, 10:28 PM

Good portraits. The lighting is appropriate and the model sweetly posed with a lovely balance of bright and complementary colours. #2 I though might have been given a little too much head room in the image. But otherwise well done.

Michu · 03-20-2013, 07:06 AM

Thank you very much for your opinions.

bezuidar · 03-20-2013, 10:53 AM - **1 Like**

Originally posted by CB Knipp

I sure hope she is! I do not wish to witness a crime here on the forums...

Meaning that she is sitting in front of me talking to me! You know what I mean ;-)https://www.pentaxforums.com/forums/images/smilies/lol.png

03-19-2013, 03:07 PM	#8
jnguyen Veteran Member Join Date: Apr 2012 Location: Bellingham, WA Posts: 446	The second photo is beautiful. What I like: #1. The image is sharp and well exposed. #2. The color of the dress complement the model. #3. The lace and embroidery evoke tradition and history. What you can do to enhance the photo: #1. The right hand is hidden. I would like to see the model place her right hand on her left knee, for example. #2. The folds on the dress at the feet of the model should be straighten a little more to reveal the beautiful embroidery. #3. The green background complements the model and her dress. Unfortunately it ended. It created an imaginary line, cutting the model left hand. The changing background is distracting. I look forward to seeing more of your beautiful and creative work. Last edited by jnguyen; 03-19-2013 at 03:37 PM.

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03-17-2013, 03:44 PM - 3 Likes	#1
Michu Forum Member Join Date: Dec 2010 Location: Bydgoszcz Posts: 59	Olivia Kheyyy... Models: Olivia, ambient light, somewhere in northern Poland... 01. 02.

03-17-2013, 03:59 PM	#2
Kerrowdown PEG Moderator Join Date: Aug 2008 Location: Highlands of Scotland... "Hold Infinity in the palm of your hand" - William Blake Photos: Gallery Posts: 57,867	Really like the second, beautiful even light, well done.

03-17-2013, 05:03 PM	#3
Na Horuk Veteran Member Join Date: Feb 2012 Location: Slovenia, probably Photos: Gallery \| Albums Posts: 11,186	Really lovely shots, especially the first one, reminds me of a painting

03-17-2013, 05:15 PM	#4
NewportPreacher Senior Member Join Date: Jul 2007 Location: Phnom Penh, Cambodia Photos: Gallery Posts: 150	I think the second one is nearly perfect. The first is good, but I wonder if it would be more compelling with and bit more light in the shadows and/or cropped tighter on the top-left — my eye wants to see more of the model in that one. Still, that's a very subjective call and both of them are gorgeous photos.

03-18-2013, 09:43 PM	#5
Alliecat Veteran Member Join Date: Dec 2010 Location: East of Everywhere, Canada Posts: 740	I like both! The first in particular is very fairy-tale-princess-fantasy-movie -ish. Like it's out of a movie set. Lovely model, lovely outfit too.

03-18-2013, 09:46 PM	#6
CB Knipp Senior Member Join Date: Jan 2013 Location: Sendai, Japan Posts: 169	Great shots! The first looks for "fantasy" while the second I feel is stronger. Love the lighting and the green background works perfectly.

03-19-2013, 07:00 AM	#7
smf Pentaxian Join Date: Feb 2008 Location: Midland, MI Photos: Gallery \| Albums Posts: 4,083	Superb!

03-19-2013, 03:15 PM	#9
normhead Pentaxian Join Date: Jun 2007 Location: Near Algonquin Park Photos: Gallery \| Albums Posts: 40,451	Very nice work...while I wouldn't perhaps tell you what to do with her hands, as above, I would say the hand placement is probably the weakest part of the images, so, you got it 99% right.

03-19-2013, 03:44 PM	#10
jac Loyal Site Supporter Join Date: Dec 2010 Location: Clyde River, Nunavut, Canada Posts: 2,364	Aw heck, if I could get as far as you got, I'd be very pleased with myself. Great work!

03-19-2013, 10:07 PM	#11
bezuidar Veteran Member Join Date: Aug 2010 Location: Centurion, South Africa Photos: Gallery Posts: 380	First picture looks like she is a live.....very well done.

03-19-2013, 10:11 PM	#12
CB Knipp Senior Member Join Date: Jan 2013 Location: Sendai, Japan Posts: 169	Originally posted by bezuidar First picture looks like she is a live I sure hope she is! I do not wish to witness a crime here on the forums...

03-19-2013, 10:28 PM	#13
Ash Loyal Site Supporter Join Date: Mar 2007 Location: Toowoomba, Queensland Photos: Gallery \| Albums Posts: 23,920	Good portraits. The lighting is appropriate and the model sweetly posed with a lovely balance of bright and complementary colours. #2 I though might have been given a little too much head room in the image. But otherwise well done.

03-20-2013, 07:06 AM	#14
Michu Forum Member Join Date: Dec 2010 Location: Bydgoszcz Posts: 59 Original Poster	Thank you very much for your opinions.

03-20-2013, 10:53 AM - 1 Like	#15
bezuidar Veteran Member Join Date: Aug 2010 Location: Centurion, South Africa Photos: Gallery Posts: 380	Originally posted by CB Knipp I sure hope she is! I do not wish to witness a crime here on the forums... Meaning that she is sitting in front of me talking to me! You know what I mean ;-)https://www.pentaxforums.com/forums/images/smilies/lol.png

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