Hi
Did your teacher explain to you how oversaturation can be achieved ? I don't think this can be done by simple overexposure. If anything in my experience this would rather wash out colour and blow highlight and once highlights are blown they loose all detail and texture never to be covered. These days colours are saturated to your desired level in post prosessing with the appropriate software.
I too find the two shadows on either side at the front undesirable. So better lighting technique is required.
I also find your image a bit hazy and overall lacking detail and texture and the white balance is off as well.
I used OLONEO PhotEngine to reset the white balance but at the same time attempted to retain some of the warm light. I then tweaked individual colour channels, but to do this on a low quality JPG invites trouble. I also sharpened the image a bit.
I like the creative setup, I only hope you didn't flood the bathroom.
Greetings
Last edited by Schraubstock; 04-06-2014 at 03:29 AM.