[axl]

Here are two of my latest portrait attempts of my fiance. Both were taken in "makeshift studio" at her work. Any C&C is welcome.
PS: I know the first one could be sharper, se let's skip that bit




TIA Peter

[Gooshin]

framing is odd..


the first picture looks like shes standing up but you rotated it, likewise the 2nd picture would suggest she is laying down but you had it upright.

[axl]

framing is odd..


the first picture looks like shes standing up but you rotated it, likewise the 2nd picture would suggest she is laying down but you had it upright.

she was on a swinging chair, so it was hard to get good angle and nice orientation. But in a first one she was nearly lying and I was practicly right above her, and in the second one, she was sitting practicly straight. So none of them is really a rotation...

[Romoman]

The framing is kind of odd, but I liked it. I thought the pictures were good with nice diaganol lines and flows. I also liked the tonal range in both.