Streets Old Fashioned Root Beer

aaronjamesgray · 01-27-2014, 10:13 PM

I thought the color and sharpness were good here. The angle seems a bit off to me but I feel like I composed it well enough. It could do with some better lighting but it was a rainy day. Please, feel free to give me any feedback, positive or negative.

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AquaDome · 01-27-2014, 10:17 PM

I like it. Trying to get some fill-flash on her would have spoiled her day-dreamy look.

nosliwmit · 01-28-2014, 06:27 AM

If you had a "do over", it would be good to get the woman in focus better. Right now the focus seems to be on the Cream Soda or Orange Zippy barrel. If it's a RAW file you should be able to lighten her a bit but it might just highlight the mis-focus. My two-cents' worth...

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01-27-2014, 10:17 PM	#2
AquaDome Veteran Member Join Date: Jan 2014 Location: New Carlisle, IN Photos: Gallery \| Albums Posts: 1,475	I like it. Trying to get some fill-flash on her would have spoiled her day-dreamy look.

01-28-2014, 06:27 AM	#3
nosliwmit Pentaxian Join Date: Nov 2010 Location: Pacific Northwest Photos: Gallery Posts: 913	If you had a "do over", it would be good to get the woman in focus better. Right now the focus seems to be on the Cream Soda or Orange Zippy barrel. If it's a RAW file you should be able to lighten her a bit but it might just highlight the mis-focus. My two-cents' worth...