Originally posted by j2photos I like it but the whole image is leaning to the right, I would straighten it up a little. That is the only thing I see that I could correct.
Thank you j2photos. Originally I was under same impression, but when I check level against the roof of the building on the background, perhaps the post is leaning to the right.
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Originally posted by FrankC Good job on the exposure. Snow scenes can difficult at times to get the metering right.
I suppose you intended for your main subject to be the Japanese garden decoration. If the decoration is to be the main subject then why does it occupy only about 5% of the frame? The background is so incredibly busy and distracting that it is not only difficult for the viewer to fully understand where to look but the decoration (especially at the top) is blending into the background.
The foreground appears to have some dark areas that are running horizontally to the right of the decoration. This area seems like it could possibly mimic the shape of the decoration. If so, then moving 90 degrees to your right and getting in closer would create a composition composed of two similar shapes (the garden decoration and the dark water/ice area below) Getting in close to fill the frame with just those elements and while using an f/stop to get just that area in focus is how I'd approach this scene.
Thank you FrankC for detailed feedback. I see your points for improvement. I used K-30 with 50 mm to measure exposure.
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