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04-11-2014, 07:19 AM   #1
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Cold Pastel Hills
Lens: Pentax DA 35mm f2.4 Camera: Pentax K-01 Photo Location: Germany ISO: 100 Shutter Speed: 1/350s Aperture: F8 


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Hi Na Horuk,
While I admire the technical aspects of your photo, the textures, sharpness and rendering, it lacks a central visual cue, a point of interest. Nowhere for my eye to go, so it wanders. Imagine a tractor, horse or people walking, mid-distance, slightly off-center horizontally. See what I mean?
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04-11-2014, 05:45 PM   #3
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I see what you are saying. Unfortunately, there was nothing there at that moment, so I was hoping the hills would be enough, focusing on light, textures, and colours. I will keep that comment in mind.
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