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06-13-2014, 01:42 PM - 1 Like   #1
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I am trying to learn animal bnw portraits, tell me what do you think,help me improve

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06-13-2014, 04:32 PM   #2
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Very good photo and the composition is perfect, if any thing to improve is its very dark and may try to compensate a little on the exposure in PP or lighten a little in shadows. But it is really up to you and your judgement if it is to dark. See my version for comparison, hope you do not mind the comparison.
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Great photo of an ugly bird! I prefer the original edit, although I like gmans edit as well...I like how the subtle darkness adds to the creepiness of the intense stare from the vulture.
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The textures really make this shine for me. I like the original untouched.

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