Abstract Door steps guard.

pavpen · 06-14-2014, 07:50 PM

I probably should open aperture to f5.6 to isolate tree more.
Thank you for your critique.
Cheers.

https://www.flickr.com/photos/pavpen/14177052220/

Last edited by pavpen; 06-19-2014 at 07:22 PM. Reason: spelling

Sparkle · 06-19-2014, 12:40 PM

I would cut-down the tree before someone runs into it and gets a bad bump on the head or worse.

Parallax · 06-19-2014, 12:57 PM

Is this a photo you have the opportunity to re-take? If so, I would move a bit more to the right so the tree doesn't blend into the door, and to better emphasize that it overhangs the stairs.

pavpen · 06-19-2014, 07:07 PM

Originally posted by Sparkle

I would cut-down the tree before someone runs into it and gets a bad bump on the head or worse.

Yes, this tree creates real threat to residents of this house, especially in case of the emergency evacuation.
Cheers.

---------- Post added 06-19-14 at 10:21 PM ----------

Originally posted by Parallax

Is this a photo you have the opportunity to re-take? If so, I would move a bit more to the right so the tree doesn't blend into the door, and to better emphasize that it overhangs the stairs.

Thank you Parallax, i see your point. Your thought was on the back of my mind when i try to compose this shot. I guess, for some erroneous reason, i try to include other elements that surround the main object of interest. It's very hard to loose the bad habits. I'll try to re-take it to see the difference.

Cheers.

06-14-2014, 07:50 PM	#1
pavpen Veteran Member Join Date: Sep 2012 Location: US Photos: Albums Posts: 381	Door steps guard. Lens: Rikenon 80mm f/3.5 Camera: Ricoh Diacord G ISO: 100 Shutter Speed: 1/4s Aperture: F8 I probably should open aperture to f5.6 to isolate tree more. Thank you for your critique. Cheers. https://www.flickr.com/photos/pavpen/14177052220/ Last edited by pavpen; 06-19-2014 at 07:22 PM. Reason: spelling

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Sparkle Inactive Account Join Date: Mar 2009 Location: Halifax, Nova Scotia Photos: Gallery \| Albums Posts: 1,521	I would cut-down the tree before someone runs into it and gets a bad bump on the head or worse.

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Parallax Senior Moderator Loyal Site Supporter Join Date: Apr 2008 Location: South Dakota Photos: Gallery Posts: 19,332	Is this a photo you have the opportunity to re-take? If so, I would move a bit more to the right so the tree doesn't blend into the door, and to better emphasize that it overhangs the stairs.

06-19-2014, 07:07 PM	#4
pavpen Veteran Member Join Date: Sep 2012 Location: US Photos: Albums Posts: 381 Original Poster	Originally posted by Sparkle I would cut-down the tree before someone runs into it and gets a bad bump on the head or worse. Yes, this tree creates real threat to residents of this house, especially in case of the emergency evacuation. Cheers. ---------- Post added 06-19-14 at 10:21 PM ---------- Originally posted by Parallax Is this a photo you have the opportunity to re-take? If so, I would move a bit more to the right so the tree doesn't blend into the door, and to better emphasize that it overhangs the stairs. Thank you Parallax, i see your point. Your thought was on the back of my mind when i try to compose this shot. I guess, for some erroneous reason, i try to include other elements that surround the main object of interest. It's very hard to loose the bad habits. I'll try to re-take it to see the difference. Cheers.