Cityscape Cramped

Na Horuk · 06-24-2014, 02:53 PM

Cramped city, juxtaposition of architecture

Winder · 06-24-2014, 03:29 PM

Do you have a wider version of the scene? I get the feeling that going wider would help the image. The only thing in the image that catches my eye is the "1107" painted on the roof of one of the buildings. I think the image needs to either be tighter on a subject of interest, or wider for a greater sense of scale. I like the colors and the process. Has a film look to that reminds me of some Agfa that I shoot many years ago.

Na Horuk · 06-24-2014, 04:43 PM

Would this be better? Basically I only rotated the photo to keep the verticals vertical, so I don't have much of a crop to work with. I took this one with a 100mm lens. I wanted to show what an odd ecosystem a city is, with different architectural styles smushed together

06-24-2014, 02:53 PM	#1
Na Horuk Veteran Member Join Date: Feb 2012 Location: Slovenia, probably Photos: Gallery \| Albums Posts: 11,186	Cramped Lens: Pentax DFA 100mm f2.8 macro WR Camera: Pentax K-01 Photo Location: Ljubljana, Slovenia ISO: 800 Shutter Speed: 1/350s Aperture: F4 Cramped city, juxtaposition of architecture

06-24-2014, 04:43 PM	#3
Na Horuk Veteran Member Join Date: Feb 2012 Location: Slovenia, probably Photos: Gallery \| Albums Posts: 11,186 Original Poster	Would this be better? Basically I only rotated the photo to keep the verticals vertical, so I don't have much of a crop to work with. I took this one with a 100mm lens. I wanted to show what an odd ecosystem a city is, with different architectural styles smushed together Last edited by Na Horuk; 05-23-2017 at 09:10 AM.

06-24-2014, 03:29 PM	#2
Winder Veteran Member Join Date: Apr 2010 Location: Tennessee Posts: 6,617	Do you have a wider version of the scene? I get the feeling that going wider would help the image. The only thing in the image that catches my eye is the "1107" painted on the roof of one of the buildings. I think the image needs to either be tighter on a subject of interest, or wider for a greater sense of scale. I like the colors and the process. Has a film look to that reminds me of some Agfa that I shoot many years ago.

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