People Joanna

Motyl · 06-27-2014, 11:37 PM - **1 Like**

Sparkle · 06-29-2014, 12:47 PM

Joanna looks terrified. "Smile for the camera."

She should move away from the background.

Winder · 06-29-2014, 02:22 PM

I would have turned he 180 degrees so her back is to the light and then have her turn her face into the light. As Sparkle says, she needs to be farther from the background. A wider aperture and a longer focal length would help. No EXIF information, so its hard to be specific. The lighting makes it a little flat.

06-27-2014, 11:37 PM - 1 Like	#1
Motyl Forum Member Join Date: Oct 2011 Location: Kraków Photos: Gallery Posts: 83	Joanna Lens: tamron 17-50 Camera: K-30 Photo Location: Kraków

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06-29-2014, 12:47 PM	#2
Sparkle Inactive Account Join Date: Mar 2009 Location: Halifax, Nova Scotia Photos: Gallery \| Albums Posts: 1,521	Joanna looks terrified. "Smile for the camera." She should move away from the background.

06-29-2014, 02:22 PM	#3
Winder Veteran Member Join Date: Apr 2010 Location: Tennessee Posts: 6,617	I would have turned he 180 degrees so her back is to the light and then have her turn her face into the light. As Sparkle says, she needs to be farther from the background. A wider aperture and a longer focal length would help. No EXIF information, so its hard to be specific. The lighting makes it a little flat.

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