Originally posted by d.bradley To be honest, I'm not sure what you're going for, but you need lots more light...noise can be added later. It's pretty flat, lacking dynamic range, and composition leaves the feeling of regular old snapshots.
Decide on your motivation and push toward an emphasis on that....
**Apology noted, although I still don't like the thread title.
Basically she wants 3 pictures to frame and hang in the bathroom...
Lighting is definitely something to be improved, and I am not sure how to approach that: i have one flash and some house lights i can move around. I guess i'd have to move the sources i have around and see what works better.
Regarding composition, i wish i had more space to work around, but it's a tiny bathroom. i thought about getting a stool and trying different angles, but my sister only had a cloth chair and wouldnt let me step on it.
do you think different perspectives would better overall composition?
Regarding the DR, I am not even sure how to do anything about that. What do you mean actually? at the time she was wearing a black robe, the walls are white, and there is not much color in the bathroom anyways... and we decided to go B&W.
Regarding the title, obviously i was simply trying to get more clicks than to be disrespectful, not to mention that it is totally accurate. I am not sure how to change it, but i'll try as to avoid any issues.
PS. I see you are in Grand Cayman! I was there in january and loved it! I just wished I had a underwater housing for my olympus at that trip for the Sting Ray City photos! Simply gorgeous... nice place to live!