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shaolen · 01-07-2015, 08:47 PM

Let me know what your thoughts are on the bokeh, composition, and colors

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MadMathMind · 01-08-2015, 06:59 PM - **1 Like**

I like the detail in her hair. That it's so messy really makes for a cool shot.

The colors are a bit too green tinted for my taste. The placement of the woman in the image is great, but you need to crop the dog ears in the bottom right corner.

Flugelbinder · 01-08-2015, 07:11 PM - **1 Like**

Originally posted by MadMathMind

I like the detail in her hair. That it's so messy really makes for a cool shot.

The colors are a bit too green tinted for my taste. The placement of the woman in the image is great, but you need to crop the dog ears in the bottom right corner.

Agree with everything. Although you're in the right direction with composition, try to be aware of details such as the dog's ears. It will save you pp time, and at times it may be very difficult to remove...

shaolen · 01-08-2015, 07:27 PM

Originally posted by MadMathMind

I like the detail in her hair. That it's so messy really makes for a cool shot.

The colors are a bit too green tinted for my taste. The placement of the woman in the image is great, but you need to crop the dog ears in the bottom right corner.

Yes I think you're right about the dog hairs lol

---------- Post added 01-08-15 at 07:05 PM ----------

Originally posted by Flugelbinder

Agree with everything. Although you're in the right direction with composition, try to be aware of details such as the dog's ears. It will save you pp time, and at times it may be very difficult to remove...

Thanks for the critique. Im always worried that I don't have good composition or at least that I don't think about the composition enough when shooting

aleonx3 · 01-08-2015, 08:06 PM - **1 Like**

Originally posted by shaolen

Yes I think you're right about the dog hairs lol

That's easy to fix... just use content aware fill in PP will fix the problem in a flash..
To me, there is nothing wrong with the photo technically aside from being nice and sharp, it does not however grab the viewers attention unless of course you know the person. Of course, just IMHO and YMMV.

shaolen · 01-08-2015, 08:35 PM

Originally posted by aleonx3

That's easy to fix... just use content aware fill in PP will fix the problem in a flash..
To me, there is nothing wrong with the photo technically aside from being nice and sharp, it does not however grab the viewers attention unless of course you know the person. Of course, just IMHO and YMMV.

Thanks for the PP help

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01-08-2015, 06:59 PM - 1 Like	#2
MadMathMind Veteran Member Join Date: Dec 2013 Location: Houston, TX Photos: Gallery Posts: 1,717	I like the detail in her hair. That it's so messy really makes for a cool shot. The colors are a bit too green tinted for my taste. The placement of the woman in the image is great, but you need to crop the dog ears in the bottom right corner.

01-08-2015, 07:11 PM - 1 Like	#3
Flugelbinder Veteran Member Join Date: Nov 2014 Location: Toronto - missing the ocean Posts: 466	Originally posted by MadMathMind I like the detail in her hair. That it's so messy really makes for a cool shot. The colors are a bit too green tinted for my taste. The placement of the woman in the image is great, but you need to crop the dog ears in the bottom right corner. Agree with everything. Although you're in the right direction with composition, try to be aware of details such as the dog's ears. It will save you pp time, and at times it may be very difficult to remove...

01-08-2015, 07:27 PM	#4
shaolen Veteran Member Join Date: May 2012 Location: Phoenix AZ Posts: 1,047 Original Poster	Originally posted by MadMathMind I like the detail in her hair. That it's so messy really makes for a cool shot. The colors are a bit too green tinted for my taste. The placement of the woman in the image is great, but you need to crop the dog ears in the bottom right corner. Yes I think you're right about the dog hairs lol ---------- Post added 01-08-15 at 07:05 PM ---------- Originally posted by Flugelbinder Agree with everything. Although you're in the right direction with composition, try to be aware of details such as the dog's ears. It will save you pp time, and at times it may be very difficult to remove... Thanks for the critique. Im always worried that I don't have good composition or at least that I don't think about the composition enough when shooting

01-08-2015, 08:06 PM - 1 Like	#5
aleonx3 Veteran Member Join Date: Jul 2007 Location: Brampton, Ontario Photos: Gallery \| Albums Posts: 3,996	Originally posted by shaolen Yes I think you're right about the dog hairs lol That's easy to fix... just use content aware fill in PP will fix the problem in a flash.. To me, there is nothing wrong with the photo technically aside from being nice and sharp, it does not however grab the viewers attention unless of course you know the person. Of course, just IMHO and YMMV.

01-08-2015, 08:35 PM	#6
shaolen Veteran Member Join Date: May 2012 Location: Phoenix AZ Posts: 1,047 Original Poster	Originally posted by aleonx3 That's easy to fix... just use content aware fill in PP will fix the problem in a flash.. To me, there is nothing wrong with the photo technically aside from being nice and sharp, it does not however grab the viewers attention unless of course you know the person. Of course, just IMHO and YMMV. Thanks for the PP help

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