Black & White B7W Film Set

jgblodgett · 01-12-2015, 08:06 PM

Just a few B&W shots from my first time out with my film cameras. Would love any kind of critique. Thank you in advance.

jawsy · 01-12-2015, 11:47 PM

Your style and medium isn't really something I'm qualified to comment on, but I would suggest levelling the horizon in some of the shots showing structures.

I don't mind the portrait shot. The line of haze across his beany looks like a wire or string was running across the face of the lens, but it's not that noticable.

jgblodgett · 01-14-2015, 08:26 AM

Originally posted by jawsy

Your style and medium isn't really something I'm qualified to comment on, but I would suggest levelling the horizon in some of the shots showing structures.

I don't mind the portrait shot. The line of haze across his beany looks like a wire or string was running across the face of the lens, but it's not that noticable.

Thank you for the comment. I appreciate the help

01-12-2015, 08:06 PM	#1
jgblodgett Senior Member Join Date: May 2014 Posts: 153	B7W Film Set Lens: Multiple Camera: Pentax k1000/Ricoh XR-7 Photo Location: California ISO: 400 Just a few B&W shots from my first time out with my film cameras. Would love any kind of critique. Thank you in advance.

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01-12-2015, 11:47 PM	#2
jawsy Veteran Member Join Date: Mar 2009 Location: Australia Photos: Gallery \| Albums Posts: 422	Your style and medium isn't really something I'm qualified to comment on, but I would suggest levelling the horizon in some of the shots showing structures. I don't mind the portrait shot. The line of haze across his beany looks like a wire or string was running across the face of the lens, but it's not that noticable.

01-14-2015, 08:26 AM	#3
jgblodgett Senior Member Join Date: May 2014 Posts: 153 Original Poster	Originally posted by jawsy Your style and medium isn't really something I'm qualified to comment on, but I would suggest levelling the horizon in some of the shots showing structures. I don't mind the portrait shot. The line of haze across his beany looks like a wire or string was running across the face of the lens, but it's not that noticable. Thank you for the comment. I appreciate the help