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06-22-2015, 11:02 AM   #1
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B&W Street Photography
Lens: Zeiss 24-70mm f4 Camera: Sony A7r Photo Location: Koh Samui, Thailand ISO: 400 

I haven't had any of my photos critiqued by other photographers before. But judging from these shots what can I work more on? I'm trying to aim for more street style photography or what I run into mostly when I travel.

https://www.flickr.com/photos/134094967@N06/18840191708/in/dateposted-public/
https://www.flickr.com/photos/134094967@N06/19030753171/in/dateposted-public/
https://www.flickr.com/photos/134094967@N06/19002592096/in/dateposted-public/
https://www.flickr.com/photos/134094967@N06/18407113183/in/dateposted-public/

Sorry I had to use links, I would upload them directly but my internet speed is notoriously slow. Feel free to critique my other work on the album.
In my photos I tend to aim for some narrative, though I had been also trying to apply some composition rules (basic ones) too.

06-23-2015, 03:13 AM   #2
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I really like your style! The only feedback I can really give is the paradox of street photography-- trying to get closer to your subjects without breaking in and ruining the moment. Nonetheless, your photos do a good job of telling a narrative.
Purely in terms of rendering, a few of your photos have a bit of a vignette on them, and I'd like them to have a tad more exposure, but that's just a personal preference. Your work is awesome!
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