Great photo overall. My only critique would be on the framing. If it's going to be in tight enough that the back of the shoulder is cut off, the elbow is cut off, the fingers are cut off, etc, then I would suggest that the right side of the photo come in a bit, so that the back of her arm is cut off instead of exposing a random corner of blurred background, which is a bit distracting. I think by bringing in the right side of the photo and cutting out that exposed corner, her arm creates a more complete frame of her face and makes the shot feel more intimate. I held a piece of cardboard up to my monitor to remove that corner in the right, and it did wonders for the photo (I think).
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