Landscape Evening Storm Mt. Moran

bluestringer · 11-05-2020, 05:58 AM

Beautiful.

ovaletedecopas · 11-05-2020, 02:18 PM

awesome!

kjfishman · 11-06-2020, 10:10 AM

Looks flawless to me. Wish we had views like that where I live.

josephwamsley · 06-20-2021, 02:40 PM

I love the color and detail in the shot. As someone else mentioned in their comment, I would have tried to get the reflection to not "touch" the river bank. That is slightly distracting and cutting the flow of the image off for me. Also in your edits it looks like you tried to darken the sky a bit to pull out the mountains, however it looks like the peak of 2 of the mountains were included in that darkening. If you could mask that out it would make the mountains pop a little more (just be careful not to have a halo around the mountain, that is also a common edit that is really distracting. Overall great shot.

**Peter Rockstroh** · 06-20-2021, 06:17 PM

What a spectacular place and moment you witnessed.

**Fdooch** · 06-21-2021, 01:30 AM

Try a 16-9 aspect ratio. For the landscape, this will be good. And the excess greens will be cut off from the bottom.

vijaykishan · 06-21-2021, 11:17 PM

is it just me or are we all commenting on a picture that was added to the critique section in 2015 ? IMHO a tad too late for critique. YMMV. If still relevant, yes the sky a tad overcooked and some cropping on the sides would bring the main subjects to focus.

chessov · 06-23-2021, 02:54 AM

Good composition where you have taken excellent care of the geometry: pleasing angle of the coastline, complete reflections of both mountain tops. Nice dynamic range without the unnatural HDR effect. Kudos!

rojaba · 06-25-2021, 11:54 PM

Love this. As others have mentioned, just push that slider back every so slightly to get rid of the strange color combo in the sky in the top corner. But other than that, really cool.

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11-05-2020, 05:58 AM	#31
bluestringer Veteran Member Join Date: Nov 2011 Location: Cotton fields of South Georgia Photos: Gallery Posts: 2,748	Beautiful.

11-05-2020, 02:18 PM	#32
ovaletedecopas Forum Member Join Date: Jun 2011 Photos: Gallery Posts: 56	awesome!

11-06-2020, 10:10 AM	#33
kjfishman Pentaxian Join Date: Apr 2010 Location: St. Louis Photos: Gallery \| Albums Posts: 704	Looks flawless to me. Wish we had views like that where I live.

06-20-2021, 02:40 PM	#34
josephwamsley Junior Member Join Date: Jan 2018 Location: Utah Posts: 47	I love the color and detail in the shot. As someone else mentioned in their comment, I would have tried to get the reflection to not "touch" the river bank. That is slightly distracting and cutting the flow of the image off for me. Also in your edits it looks like you tried to darken the sky a bit to pull out the mountains, however it looks like the peak of 2 of the mountains were included in that darkening. If you could mask that out it would make the mountains pop a little more (just be careful not to have a halo around the mountain, that is also a common edit that is really distracting. Overall great shot.

06-20-2021, 06:17 PM	#35
Peter Rockstroh Admiral Join Date: Nov 2020 Location: Bogota Posts: 445	What a spectacular place and moment you witnessed.

06-21-2021, 01:30 AM	#36
Fdooch Site Supporter Join Date: Oct 2019 Location: Moscow Photos: Albums Posts: 761	Try a 16-9 aspect ratio. For the landscape, this will be good. And the excess greens will be cut off from the bottom.

06-21-2021, 11:17 PM	#37
vijaykishan Pentaxian Join Date: Mar 2021 Photos: Gallery Posts: 999	is it just me or are we all commenting on a picture that was added to the critique section in 2015 ? IMHO a tad too late for critique. YMMV. If still relevant, yes the sky a tad overcooked and some cropping on the sides would bring the main subjects to focus.

06-23-2021, 02:54 AM	#38
chessov Senior Member Join Date: Jul 2020 Posts: 107	Good composition where you have taken excellent care of the geometry: pleasing angle of the coastline, complete reflections of both mountain tops. Nice dynamic range without the unnatural HDR effect. Kudos!

06-25-2021, 11:54 PM	#39
rojaba Senior Member Join Date: Dec 2006 Location: Herzogenaurach Photos: Albums Posts: 226	Love this. As others have mentioned, just push that slider back every so slightly to get rid of the strange color combo in the sky in the top corner. But other than that, really cool.