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**Draig** · 11-15-2015, 01:12 AM

Just a simple photo of a couple of young children at the Old Fishing Boat Harbour. These kids were delightful and just begged to have their photo taken.

An Critique would be welcome. Photo edited in Adobe Photoshop Express.

Thanks and regards
Colin

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**Bruce Clark** · 11-15-2015, 03:59 PM

I like this photo for the expressions on their faces, especially the boy. The face matches the shirt. All I would do in editing is clone out that stick in the bottom right.

Macario · 11-16-2015, 01:47 AM

I also like it a lot. The contrast with the girl (a real model). And the boy who doesn't care is just great.
If any critism, maybe the right side is a bit distracting (I think is a concrete wall that you see).

**Draig** · 11-16-2015, 05:43 AM

Thank You Bruce and Malaria for your comments.

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11-15-2015, 03:59 PM	#2
Bruce Clark Loyal Site Supporter Join Date: Mar 2010 Location: Ocean Grove, Victoria Photos: Gallery \| Albums Posts: 4,458	I like this photo for the expressions on their faces, especially the boy. The face matches the shirt. All I would do in editing is clone out that stick in the bottom right.

11-16-2015, 01:47 AM	#3
Macario Pentaxian Join Date: Feb 2011 Location: Hoek van Holland Photos: Gallery \| Albums Posts: 1,393	I also like it a lot. The contrast with the girl (a real model). And the boy who doesn't care is just great. If any critism, maybe the right side is a bit distracting (I think is a concrete wall that you see).

11-16-2015, 05:43 AM	#4
Draig Site Supporter Join Date: Jun 2008 Location: Perth, Western Australia Photos: Gallery Posts: 38 Original Poster	Thank You Bruce and Malaria for your comments.

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