Architecture CSU Monterey library

alsorto · 12-12-2015, 07:09 PM

Critique, Thank you.

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Macario · 12-15-2015, 11:39 PM

I have to say it is a very cool idea with a nice composition. But I do find it a bit flat, bit too grey. It could use more contrast to give it more punch

voy-tech · 12-16-2015, 02:44 PM

What @Macario said, plus I would also like to see all three lamps in focus, unless you change the angle so that they line up more - than a shallow DoF could work better for me.

X atnep · 12-17-2015, 12:58 PM

i like the those butyfull lamp are dominant in the dark gray .and wonders what behind that window ?

alsorto · 12-17-2015, 03:28 PM

Thank you all for the comments!

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12-15-2015, 11:39 PM	#2
Macario Pentaxian Join Date: Feb 2011 Location: Hoek van Holland Photos: Gallery \| Albums Posts: 1,393	I have to say it is a very cool idea with a nice composition. But I do find it a bit flat, bit too grey. It could use more contrast to give it more punch

12-16-2015, 02:44 PM	#3
voy-tech Senior Member Join Date: Dec 2014 Location: Portland, OR Posts: 214	What @Macario said, plus I would also like to see all three lamps in focus, unless you change the angle so that they line up more - than a shallow DoF could work better for me.

12-17-2015, 12:58 PM	#4
X atnep Junior Member Join Date: Nov 2013 Photos: Gallery \| Albums Posts: 31	i like the those butyfull lamp are dominant in the dark gray .and wonders what behind that window ?

12-17-2015, 03:28 PM	#5
alsorto New Member Join Date: Dec 2014 Posts: 7 Original Poster	Thank you all for the comments!

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