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cm.walsh · 04-07-2016, 12:54 PM

Still playing with this one, so critique is very welcome

slip · 04-07-2016, 03:58 PM

Over all a good shot. The leg/knee looks a little out of sorts IMHO.

Randy

**robgski** · 04-07-2016, 07:42 PM

From the waist up, nicely doen, I agree the leg position is awkward and distracting.

The master, the swabber, the boatswain and I,
The gunner and his mate
Loved Mall, Meg and Marian and Margery,
But none of us cared for Kate;
For she had a tongue with a tang,
Would cry to a sailor, Go hang!
She loved not the savour of tar nor of pitch,
Yet a tailor might scratch her where'er she did itch:
Then to sea, boys, and let her go hang!- The Tempest Act 2 Scene 2

**Schraubstock** · 04-07-2016, 11:00 PM

Originally posted by cm.walsh

Still playing with this one,

Stop playing with her and start taking photos.

rednax · 04-08-2016, 02:08 AM

Originally posted by robgski

From the waist up, nicely doen, I agree the leg position is awkward and distracting.

The master, the swabber, the boatswain and I,
The gunner and his mate
Loved Mall, Meg and Marian and Margery,
But none of us cared for Kate;
For she had a tongue with a tang,
Would cry to a sailor, Go hang!
She loved not the savour of tar nor of pitch,
Yet a tailor might scratch her where'er she did itch:
Then to sea, boys, and let her go hang!- The Tempest Act 2 Scene 2

Wow, great poem !

slip · 04-08-2016, 08:12 AM

Originally posted by Schraubstock

Stop playing with her and start taking photos.

That's funny LOL

Randy

**Schraubstock** · 04-08-2016, 08:31 PM

Originally posted by slip

That's funny LOL

Looks like your humour meter is in good working order.

**Tonytee** · 04-08-2016, 09:11 PM

Very lovely young lady and a wonderful photograph. I like all of it, especially the positioning of her legs. Seems to be even more inviting. Thanks very much for sharing.

Tonytee

Matt · 04-10-2016, 07:43 AM

Just some random shots.

If she is sad and drinking alone her posture could be more closed... Almost fetal.

Based on her openness you could almost add another glass to the picture and make her a little more prone. On side and legs slightly open. Add a dress shirt on the floor.. Or a tie and the mood might be a little more focused.

Cool shot though.

---------- Post added 04-10-2016 at 07:43 AM ----------

Originally posted by Matt

Just some random shots.

If she is sad and drinking alone her posture could be more closed... Almost fetal.

Based on her openness you could almost add another glass to the picture and make her a little more prone. On side and legs slightly open. Add a dress shirt on the floor.. Or a tie and the mood might be a little more focused.

Cool shot though.

Oops. Random 'thoughts'

jeverettfine · 05-09-2016, 12:18 PM

I find the knee position interesting, as well as the cropped elbows. My eye goes to her face first, which is perfect, then begins to explore the rest. The cropped glass goes with the other cropped edges. The long almost panoramic horizontal framing emphasizes her slim long torso. The more I look at it, the more I like it.

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04-07-2016, 03:58 PM	#2
slip Veteran Member Join Date: Oct 2006 Location: 2 hours north of toronto ontario canada Photos: Gallery \| Albums Posts: 3,535	Over all a good shot. The leg/knee looks a little out of sorts IMHO. Randy

04-07-2016, 07:42 PM	#3
robgski Loyal Site Supporter Join Date: Nov 2012 Location: Shenandoah Valley, Virginia Photos: Gallery \| Albums Posts: 8,817	From the waist up, nicely doen, I agree the leg position is awkward and distracting. The master, the swabber, the boatswain and I, The gunner and his mate Loved Mall, Meg and Marian and Margery, But none of us cared for Kate; For she had a tongue with a tang, Would cry to a sailor, Go hang! She loved not the savour of tar nor of pitch, Yet a tailor might scratch her where'er she did itch: Then to sea, boys, and let her go hang!- The Tempest Act 2 Scene 2

04-07-2016, 11:00 PM	#4
Schraubstock Site Supporter Join Date: Oct 2010 Location: Melbourne Photos: Gallery Posts: 3,386	Originally posted by cm.walsh Still playing with this one, Stop playing with her and start taking photos.

04-08-2016, 02:08 AM	#5
rednax Senior Member Join Date: Feb 2015 Photos: Gallery Posts: 152	Originally posted by robgski From the waist up, nicely doen, I agree the leg position is awkward and distracting. The master, the swabber, the boatswain and I, The gunner and his mate Loved Mall, Meg and Marian and Margery, But none of us cared for Kate; For she had a tongue with a tang, Would cry to a sailor, Go hang! She loved not the savour of tar nor of pitch, Yet a tailor might scratch her where'er she did itch: Then to sea, boys, and let her go hang!- The Tempest Act 2 Scene 2 Wow, great poem !

04-08-2016, 08:12 AM	#6
slip Veteran Member Join Date: Oct 2006 Location: 2 hours north of toronto ontario canada Photos: Gallery \| Albums Posts: 3,535	Originally posted by Schraubstock Stop playing with her and start taking photos. That's funny LOL Randy

04-08-2016, 08:31 PM	#7
Schraubstock Site Supporter Join Date: Oct 2010 Location: Melbourne Photos: Gallery Posts: 3,386	Originally posted by slip That's funny LOL Looks like your humour meter is in good working order.

04-08-2016, 09:11 PM	#8
Tonytee Loyal Site Supporter Join Date: Jul 2012 Photos: Gallery \| Albums Posts: 21,544	Very lovely young lady and a wonderful photograph. I like all of it, especially the positioning of her legs. Seems to be even more inviting. Thanks very much for sharing. Tonytee

04-10-2016, 07:43 AM	#9
Matt Junior Member Join Date: Feb 2008 Location: Nelson, BC Photos: Albums Posts: 42	Just some random shots. If she is sad and drinking alone her posture could be more closed... Almost fetal. Based on her openness you could almost add another glass to the picture and make her a little more prone. On side and legs slightly open. Add a dress shirt on the floor.. Or a tie and the mood might be a little more focused. Cool shot though. ---------- Post added 04-10-2016 at 07:43 AM ---------- Originally posted by Matt Just some random shots. If she is sad and drinking alone her posture could be more closed... Almost fetal. Based on her openness you could almost add another glass to the picture and make her a little more prone. On side and legs slightly open. Add a dress shirt on the floor.. Or a tie and the mood might be a little more focused. Cool shot though. Oops. Random 'thoughts'

05-09-2016, 12:18 PM	#10
jeverettfine Veteran Member Join Date: Aug 2011 Location: Austin, Texas Photos: Albums Posts: 328	I find the knee position interesting, as well as the cropped elbows. My eye goes to her face first, which is perfect, then begins to explore the rest. The cropped glass goes with the other cropped edges. The long almost panoramic horizontal framing emphasizes her slim long torso. The more I look at it, the more I like it.

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