[Tonytee]

I like this shot a great deal. It was actually a labor of love to get this composition. Thanks for looking and please feel free to offer any comments and suggestions.

Rgds,

Tonytee

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Last edited by Tonytee; 04-23-2016 at 09:27 PM. Reason: Upgraded Version

[PENTAX LEEBO]

Always thought this was a Pentax forum showing Pentax related information good luck showing your photos here with a Nikon camera and lens. Thanks

[slowpez]

Always thought this was a Pentax forum showing Pentax related information good luck showing your photos here with a Nikon camera and lens. Thanks

We are primarily a pentax group yes but ultimately, we just love photography and it doesn't matter what camera you use to take the photos that you post with the exception of a couple of contests.

You nailed the yellow Tony. Maybe a little less crop from the bottom? That would bring the center of the bloom into the bottom third. One of your best I think though.

[pjv]

We are primarily a pentax group yes but ultimately, we just love photography and it doesn't matter what camera you use to take the photos that you post with the exception of a couple of contests.

Well put indeed. I agree with this 100%. I think most of the members would too.


PS. A good photograph Tonytee. I think slowpez might be correct with her assessment too.

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[micromacro]

Great picture. I would crop a top just a bit.

[Tonytee]

We are primarily a pentax group yes but ultimately, we just love photography and it doesn't matter what camera you use to take the photos that you post with the exception of a couple of contests.

You nailed the yellow Tony. Maybe a little less crop from the bottom? That would bring the center of the bloom into the bottom third. One of your best I think though.

I see what you are saying and I thank you for it. I will certainly use that from now on.

Rgds,

Tonytee

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Well put indeed. I agree with this 100%. I think most of the members would too.


PS. A good photograph Tonytee. I think slowpez might be correct with her assessment too.

Thank you very much for your positive feedback.

Tonytee

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Great picture. I would crop a top just a bit.

Do you mean I should have lessened the distance between the top of the flower and top of the viewfinder?

Thanks, Tonytee

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Always thought this was a Pentax forum showing Pentax related information good luck showing your photos here with a Nikon camera and lens. Thanks

Also you should know that Pentaxforums.com and Nikonforums.com have the same administrator, so we all work in conjunction with one another.

Thanks very much.

Tonytee

[PENTAX LEEBO]

I see what you are saying and I thank you for it. I will certainly use that from now on.

Rgds,

Tonytee

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Thank you very much for your positive feedback.

Tonytee

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Do you mean I should have lessened the distance between the top of the flower and top of the viewfinder?

Thanks, Tonytee

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Also you should know that Pentaxforums.com and Nikonforums.com have the same administrator, so we all work in conjunction with one another.

Thanks very much.

Tonytee

I thought the photo has great contrast and makes the yellow really pop with the darker background. I didn't mean to say it to offend I thought you may have got muddled with the wrong forum,love all photography the camera is the means to the end whatever the brand. I'd be pleased if I'd taken a photo like this very good thanks Tony

[jeffshaddix]

Lovely photo! This is print worthy.

Just looking on my cell, but I'd recommend boosting the leaf just a tad, and perhaps cloning over the yellow in the bottom right corner. Otherwise, very excellent.

[Tonytee]

I thought the photo has great contrast and makes the yellow really pop with the darker background. I didn't mean to say it to offend I thought you may have got muddled with the wrong forum,love all photography the camera is the means to the end whatever the brand. I'd be pleased if I'd taken a photo like this very good thanks Tony

There was no offense taken. When I first joined this forum, I felt the same way. Thanks again for your positive feedback.

Regards,

Tonytee

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Lovely photo! This is print worthy.

Just looking on my cell, but I'd recommend boosting the leaf just a tad, and perhaps cloning over the yellow in the bottom right corner. Otherwise, very excellent.

Excuse my ignorance, but what does boosting the leaf mean? Do you mean enhancing the color by increasing saturation?

Thanks,

Tonytee

[micromacro]

Do you mean I should have lessened the distance between the top of the flower and top of the viewfinder?

Viewfinder. Just a bit of crop of the top of the frame. Again, it's about personal taste, but that tip of the flower takes too much attention, kind of a bit distraction for me.

[Tonytee]

Viewfinder. Just a bit of crop of the top of the frame. Again, it's about personal taste, but that tip of the flower takes too much attention, kind of a bit distraction for me.

Well, I have to admit that is a new one on me. You are saying that the tip of the subject is a distraction for you? Perhaps I am on a slow bell today, so if you would not mind clarifying your meaning, I will be very grateful.

Thanks,

Tonytee

[Tonytee]

Lovely photo! This is print worthy.

Just looking on my cell, but I'd recommend boosting the leaf just a tad, and perhaps cloning over the yellow in the bottom right corner. Otherwise, very excellent.

See the new photo, I did as you recommended. Thanks again,

Tonytee

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We are primarily a pentax group yes but ultimately, we just love photography and it doesn't matter what camera you use to take the photos that you post with the exception of a couple of contests.

You nailed the yellow Tony. Maybe a little less crop from the bottom? That would bring the center of the bloom into the bottom third. One of your best I think though.

I did make an adjustment by cloning out the distraction in bottom right corner.

Thanks,

Tonytee

[jeffshaddix]

See the new photo, I did as you recommended. Thanks again,

Tonytee

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I did make an adjustment by cloning out the distraction in bottom right corner.

Thanks,

Tonytee

Superb!

[Tonytee]

Superb!

Thank you very much,

Tonytee

[Ignacio-S]

I like this shot a great deal. It was actually a labor of love to get this composition. Thanks for looking and please feel free to offer any comments and suggestions.

Rgds,

Tonytee

Wow, well done.