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06-26-2016, 08:58 PM   #1
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While waiting for my wife doing real estate I saw this view.
Please, give your critique, I will appreciate it,
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06-27-2016, 05:57 PM   #2
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Hhhmmm! This is a real challenge. I like it, but I do not know why. I also dislike it, and again I do not know why. Overall, I think it is somewhat interesting. Not much help, I know.

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Thank you Antonio,
It call my attention the color contrast. and being bored waiting I took some pics.

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QuoteOriginally posted by tonver Quote
While waiting for my wife doing real estate I saw this view.
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Yes. Capture the moment - though this view still stands today ;-)
This is a shot with lines - nicely composed.

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QuoteOriginally posted by tonver Quote
While waiting for my wife doing real estate I saw this view.
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I like how the blues pop
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I like how the blues pop
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QuoteOriginally posted by henrikpedersen33 Quote
Yes. Capture the moment - though this view still stands today ;-)
This is a shot with lines - nicely composed.
Thanks for your comments.
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QuoteOriginally posted by tonver Quote
While waiting for my wife doing real estate I saw this view.
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Has to be Florida. Great color!
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QuoteOriginally posted by tonver Quote
While waiting for my wife doing real estate I saw this view.
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nice colors and lines

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Has to be Florida. Great color!
Yes, the Sunshine state.
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nice colors and lines
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i think i know what might be bothering me - the hard vertical doesn't align in my brain with the horizontal lines of the building.


That being said, prioritizing the vertical lines was the right call. I really like the contrast of that blue, and i like your use of the gray tones.


Nice capture while you were waiting
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I tried imagining a 1:1 crop with the top removed above the left window and a little to the left and right of the blue removed as well and I really liked it - a little more abstract and nicely balanced with the four windows. What do you think?
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I like it. Contrasting colours and textures
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Yes...that building is begging for photographs. Can't comment much on composition, as I'm still learning myself (after all these years)! It interests me though...I want to walk around the scene and explore it from different angles.
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I had to have a couple of looks at the photo, and any photo that makes me do that has something.
At first glance the palm tree feels a bit too centered but at the same time it works in this image. Definitely a great building too with that blue and interesting windows.
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