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wilczek · 11-25-2016, 02:50 PM

**BigDave** · 11-27-2016, 07:59 PM

This image, though having potential, is quite washed out on my screen. Drop the lightness down on it some so we see more detail in the highlights. I am sure there is detail there to be had. When done, repost so we can truly enjoy the image!

**PenPusher** · 11-28-2016, 03:43 AM

I have no trouble seeing it on my screen, a nice shot, I have both the K200d and the A50 1.7, I think I would crop it tighter, perhaps more portrait or square format, the stem leads you nicely to the subject but for some reason I find the background a bit distracting so cropping would reduce that a bit.

Kind regards

CD

slip · 12-04-2016, 08:52 AM

I think it is overall a good shot. It could be improved either by giving some negative space on the right or getting close to the flower

Randy

**henrikpedersen33** · 07-08-2018, 04:04 PM

You've got a very nice blur in the background. Your rose, though, is a little out of focus. It's almost only the raindrop that are in focus. Trim it a little bit more next time.

Photogoof · 08-25-2018, 02:19 PM

Good bokeh!

ChristianRock · 08-30-2018, 07:51 AM

I like the angle of the flower, the colors and the bokeh. But since this is the Critique section I have to say that the green front blur from that leaf is quite distracting...

11-25-2016, 02:50 PM	#1
wilczek New Member Join Date: Oct 2016 Location: Wrocław Posts: 17	Wet rose Lens: SMC-A 50mm f1.7 Camera: Pentax k200d Aperture: F1.7

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11-27-2016, 07:59 PM	#2
BigDave Site Supporter Join Date: Sep 2010 Location: Hudson Valley, NY Photos: Gallery \| Albums Posts: 2,626	This image, though having potential, is quite washed out on my screen. Drop the lightness down on it some so we see more detail in the highlights. I am sure there is detail there to be had. When done, repost so we can truly enjoy the image!

11-28-2016, 03:43 AM	#3
PenPusher Site Supporter Join Date: Apr 2009 Location: Ireland Posts: 1,048	I have no trouble seeing it on my screen, a nice shot, I have both the K200d and the A50 1.7, I think I would crop it tighter, perhaps more portrait or square format, the stem leads you nicely to the subject but for some reason I find the background a bit distracting so cropping would reduce that a bit. Kind regards CD

12-04-2016, 08:52 AM	#4
slip Veteran Member Join Date: Oct 2006 Location: 2 hours north of toronto ontario canada Photos: Gallery \| Albums Posts: 3,535	I think it is overall a good shot. It could be improved either by giving some negative space on the right or getting close to the flower Randy

07-08-2018, 04:04 PM	#5
henrikpedersen33 Loyal Site Supporter Join Date: Jul 2016 Location: Roskilde, Denmark Photos: Gallery Posts: 2,632	You've got a very nice blur in the background. Your rose, though, is a little out of focus. It's almost only the raindrop that are in focus. Trim it a little bit more next time.

08-25-2018, 02:19 PM	#6
Photogoof Pentaxian Join Date: Jan 2008 Location: Prague Photos: Gallery Posts: 6,422	Good bokeh!

08-30-2018, 07:51 AM	#7
ChristianRock Pentaxian Join Date: Jul 2013 Location: People's Republic of America Photos: Gallery \| Albums Posts: 9,912	I like the angle of the flower, the colors and the bokeh. But since this is the Critique section I have to say that the green front blur from that leaf is quite distracting...

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