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09-01-2008, 07:27 PM   #1
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Hey all,

I try not to post multiple photos in one critique, but I would appreciate feedback on these two. Thanks in advance


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1 SB25 shot through white umbrella camera left, gelled with 1/8 CTO I believe

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Edit: Changed the img tags, can people see both now?


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09-02-2008, 03:41 AM   #2
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For the one that I can see it's well done and without the second I cant compare it

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09-02-2008, 01:57 PM   #3
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Hi, I like the first one but as you didn't manage to get the whole of the helmet in, I would crop from the top to just above the brighter semi circular reflection on the helmet.
The second one, good lighting but the pose looks uncomfortable, I would crop it to head and shoulders. This is why I prefer candid over posed, with candid, the 'pose' always looks natural.
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I like the first one, all of it, composition, light, tone, great shot... really well done

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Thanks! I submitted it to the PPG so we'll see!
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