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07-21-2018, 01:53 AM   #16
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QuoteOriginally posted by Santiago Koroviev Quote
And there's nothing I can do
Everyone's talking about the left side... me, I wanted a bit more on the right for her to walk into and get her on a third.

What do you think?

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What do you think?
I don't know, too much space on the right, and rule of thirds doesn't work the way I like it here.
I wanted her to walk out of the frame and I think that goes well with picture storytelling.

Thanks anyway!
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Hi,
Very expressive photo, but as some of the comments says - the object on the left side is kind of a distraction.
The cropping suggestions for works well but in general - a step or two further during the shot might be a better way to go in future.
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I see the point Kerrowdown is making - by giving the subject a bit more space on the right her escape from the center is accentuated. this way the picture breathes and actually I didnt notice before this version of the pic that she was holding the cigarette on a pipe.

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I like the cropped version. Nice candid shot.
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QuoteOriginally posted by shyrsio Quote
I see the point Kerrowdown is making
Thanks for your vote of confidence.

I thought that the PP to create something that wasn't there originally, made if more interesting too.
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Very nice, especially in the 5:4 format!
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