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**Kerrowdown** · 07-21-2018, 01:53 AM

Originally posted by Santiago Koroviev

And there's nothing I can do

Everyone's talking about the left side... me, I wanted a bit more on the right for her to walk into and get her on a third.

What do you think?

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Santiago Koroviev · 07-21-2018, 02:45 AM

Originally posted by Kerrowdown

What do you think?

I don't know, too much space on the right, and rule of thirds doesn't work the way I like it here.
I wanted her to walk out of the frame and I think that goes well with picture storytelling.

Thanks anyway!

p0pa · 07-21-2018, 05:15 AM

Hi,
Very expressive photo, but as some of the comments says - the object on the left side is kind of a distraction.
The cropping suggestions for works well but in general - a step or two further during the shot might be a better way to go in future.

shyrsio · 08-07-2018, 12:34 AM

I see the point Kerrowdown is making - by giving the subject a bit more space on the right her escape from the center is accentuated. this way the picture breathes and actually I didnt notice before this version of the pic that she was holding the cigarette on a pipe.

Photogoof · 08-08-2018, 02:20 AM

I like the cropped version. Nice candid shot.

**Kerrowdown** · 08-08-2018, 09:16 AM

Originally posted by shyrsio

I see the point Kerrowdown is making

Thanks for your vote of confidence.

I thought that the PP to create something that wasn't there originally, made if more interesting too.

ChristianRock · 08-30-2018, 06:01 PM

Very nice, especially in the 5:4 format!

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07-21-2018, 02:45 AM	#17
Santiago Koroviev New Member Join Date: Jul 2018 Location: Belgrade, Serbia Photos: Gallery Posts: 22 Original Poster	Originally posted by Kerrowdown What do you think? I don't know, too much space on the right, and rule of thirds doesn't work the way I like it here. I wanted her to walk out of the frame and I think that goes well with picture storytelling. Thanks anyway!

07-21-2018, 05:15 AM	#18
p0pa Junior Member Join Date: Jul 2018 Posts: 26	Hi, Very expressive photo, but as some of the comments says - the object on the left side is kind of a distraction. The cropping suggestions for works well but in general - a step or two further during the shot might be a better way to go in future.

08-07-2018, 12:34 AM	#19
shyrsio Pentaxian Join Date: Apr 2016 Location: Tirana Posts: 780	I see the point Kerrowdown is making - by giving the subject a bit more space on the right her escape from the center is accentuated. this way the picture breathes and actually I didnt notice before this version of the pic that she was holding the cigarette on a pipe.

08-08-2018, 02:20 AM	#20
Photogoof Pentaxian Join Date: Jan 2008 Location: Prague Photos: Gallery Posts: 6,422	I like the cropped version. Nice candid shot.

08-08-2018, 09:16 AM	#21
Kerrowdown PEG Moderator Join Date: Aug 2008 Location: Highlands of Scotland... "Hold Infinity in the palm of your hand" - William Blake Photos: Gallery Posts: 57,805	Originally posted by shyrsio I see the point Kerrowdown is making Thanks for your vote of confidence. I thought that the PP to create something that wasn't there originally, made if more interesting too.

08-30-2018, 06:01 PM	#22
ChristianRock Pentaxian Join Date: Jul 2013 Location: People's Republic of America Photos: Gallery \| Albums Posts: 9,910	Very nice, especially in the 5:4 format!

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