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07-17-2018, 07:33 AM - 2 Likes   #1
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Lens: Jupiter 37A Camera: Canon 1100D Photo Location: Belgrade ISO: 400 Shutter Speed: 1/250s 

Taken few months ago in Belgrade. Opinions? Critique?



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Nice shot... B&W adds drama to the image and make it more powerfull. Maybe moving the frame a little to the right will make it more interesting, at least in my opinion; that wood thing or whatever it is, is a litlle distracting.
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I'd crop to 5:4 and print it.
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I quite like this but find the in-focus object on the left side rather distracting. You might want to selectively blur it, or remove it entirely through cloning or another method. It could also stand a slight highlights boost on my monitor just to emphasize the light this woman is leaving behind. You might play around with adding some grain and toning for artistic effect.

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Smoking bad for health, like the photo well done. Thank you. Cheers
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My initial thought is …. yes...crop off the wooden thingy on the left … but when I do so the image starts to look a little unbalanced, too much negative space....so now Iam not sure, lean towards leaving it as is.
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I think the object to the left helps balance the image; the subject it so powerful that I feel it needs something else to round it out. As is!

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Here are some takes on the image. Just my thinking:

5:4 Crop, Original Plus vignette:
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truly a masterpiece, congrats!
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The balance is still off even more cropped. Some association or context in the picture would help when framed so far off to one side.
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QuoteOriginally posted by tuco Quote
The balance is still off even more cropped. Some association or context in the picture would help when framed so far off to one side.
I think at that point it becomes a matter of taste and personal style
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QuoteOriginally posted by CharLac Quote
I think at that point it becomes a matter of taste and personal style
And good composition. The only thing in the picture is that lady and it is selective focus meaning you only want people to look at her. Putting her practically off the frame is just weird, IMHO. The image is a flat, low contrast scene which can be moody but some street scene would help impart that feeling and I see none.
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QuoteOriginally posted by tuco Quote
And good composition. The only thing in the picture is that lady and it is selective focus meaning you only want people to look at her. Putting her practically off the frame is just weird, IMHO. The image is a flat, low contrast scene which can be moody but some street scene would help impart that feeling and I see none.
And this is where the "And there's nothing I can do" comes into play. Cropping can fix some composition issues, but much of composition is fixed when the photo is taken. Most thinking about perspective and framing needs to happen before the shutter is tripped.
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Hey, thank you all for comments, it's really nice to see different opinions.

When I shot this photo, I imagined it as quite melancholic, with woman going out of frame to something unknown without any control, and accepting that, so the title is due to that thing. And also, I have feeling that she's quite powerful as subject, so I liked it, like that's the only way. The table on the left wasn't intentional, but at some time during post processing, I started to like it, cause it's like border of the frame in some weird way, and it quite balanced the picture. I did both versions, cropped and this one.

I know the framing here isn't by the book, and that's the reason I wanted your opinions. Thank you all!
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