Cityscape The library

mpslxz · 08-24-2018, 10:24 AM

Having fun with film again. Let me know what you guys think.

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rubenr · 08-24-2018, 10:36 AM - **1 Like**

I like it... maybe just a little bit less space in the front to be able to see the upper part of the building at the left. But as I said, I like it, nice shot! Keep it up having fun!

Where is this?

mpslxz · 08-24-2018, 10:52 AM - **1 Like**

Originally posted by rubenr

I like it... maybe just a little bit less space in the front to be able to see the upper part of the building at the left. But as I said, I like it, nice shot! Keep it up having fun!

Where is this?

Thanks. This is the public library in Vancouver BC, Canada.

**othar** · 08-24-2018, 06:47 PM - **1 Like**

Well done.
I would only change the aspect ratio to 2x3 (croping away the bottom) and maybe rotate the picture by -0,80° so the person in the centre is more vertical.

Kozlok · 08-24-2018, 07:50 PM - **1 Like**

I like the people in it; gives it a nice sense of scale.

aaacb · 08-24-2018, 08:50 PM - **1 Like**

Which film did you use? (just curious)

mpslxz · 08-25-2018, 10:04 AM - **1 Like**

Originally posted by aaacb

Which film did you use? (just curious)

Ilford delta 100

Photogoof · 08-25-2018, 02:07 PM - **1 Like**

Originally posted by mpslxz

Having fun with film again. Let me know what you guys think.

You might bump up the contrast a little.

dan.a.nesheim · 10-14-2019, 01:40 PM - **1 Like**

I would only have added 1 more stop of exposure, otherwise not change anything. Though i dont know if you kan change that easily on film camera.

aitrus3 · 12-17-2019, 12:06 PM - **1 Like**

Originally posted by mpslxz

Having fun with film again. Let me know what you guys think.

Lovely image. I like the curves and how they draw you down to the person on the path between the buildings. Well done.

Macario · 12-18-2019, 03:46 AM - **1 Like**

lovely composition, it is just a bit grey. I think it could use bit more contrast.

08amczb · 12-19-2019, 01:52 AM - **1 Like**

Straightening would help, but you would need a shift lens on film for it... I would choose an emulsion with more contrast for buildings or use some filter for the scene.
Anyway it's a great composition I like the image!

nonpigliounoshoot · 12-23-2019, 03:07 AM - **1 Like**

only slightly underexposed, nice shot.

08-24-2018, 10:24 AM	#1
mpslxz Forum Member Join Date: Oct 2015 Posts: 61	The library Lens: Tokina 28mm f2.8 Camera: K1000 ISO: 100 Having fun with film again. Let me know what you guys think. Attached Images

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08-24-2018, 10:36 AM - 1 Like	#2
rubenr Veteran Member Join Date: Dec 2015 Location: Guatemala City Photos: Albums Posts: 337	I like it... maybe just a little bit less space in the front to be able to see the upper part of the building at the left. But as I said, I like it, nice shot! Keep it up having fun! Where is this?

08-24-2018, 10:52 AM - 1 Like	#3
mpslxz Forum Member Join Date: Oct 2015 Posts: 61 Original Poster	Originally posted by rubenr I like it... maybe just a little bit less space in the front to be able to see the upper part of the building at the left. But as I said, I like it, nice shot! Keep it up having fun! Where is this? Thanks. This is the public library in Vancouver BC, Canada.

08-24-2018, 06:47 PM - 1 Like	#4
othar Site Supporter Join Date: May 2014 Location: Linz Photos: Albums Posts: 3,098	Well done. I would only change the aspect ratio to 2x3 (croping away the bottom) and maybe rotate the picture by -0,80° so the person in the centre is more vertical.

08-24-2018, 07:50 PM - 1 Like	#5
Kozlok Pentaxian Join Date: Jun 2012 Location: Albuquerque Photos: Gallery Posts: 3,148	I like the people in it; gives it a nice sense of scale.

08-24-2018, 08:50 PM - 1 Like	#6
aaacb Pentaxian Join Date: May 2016 Photos: Gallery Posts: 3,724	Which film did you use? (just curious)

08-25-2018, 10:04 AM - 1 Like	#7
mpslxz Forum Member Join Date: Oct 2015 Posts: 61 Original Poster	Originally posted by aaacb Which film did you use? (just curious) Ilford delta 100

08-25-2018, 02:07 PM - 1 Like	#8
Photogoof Pentaxian Join Date: Jan 2008 Location: Prague Photos: Gallery Posts: 6,422	Originally posted by mpslxz Having fun with film again. Let me know what you guys think. You might bump up the contrast a little.

10-14-2019, 01:40 PM - 1 Like	#9
dan.a.nesheim Senior Member Join Date: Jul 2019 Photos: Gallery Posts: 167	I would only have added 1 more stop of exposure, otherwise not change anything. Though i dont know if you kan change that easily on film camera.

12-17-2019, 12:06 PM - 1 Like	#10
aitrus3 Pentaxian Join Date: Mar 2010 Location: Kamloops B.C. Photos: Gallery \| Albums Posts: 1,432	Originally posted by mpslxz Having fun with film again. Let me know what you guys think. Lovely image. I like the curves and how they draw you down to the person on the path between the buildings. Well done.

12-18-2019, 03:46 AM - 1 Like	#11
Macario Pentaxian Join Date: Feb 2011 Location: Hoek van Holland Photos: Gallery \| Albums Posts: 1,393	lovely composition, it is just a bit grey. I think it could use bit more contrast.

12-19-2019, 01:52 AM - 1 Like	#12
08amczb Veteran Member Join Date: Dec 2013 Posts: 796	Straightening would help, but you would need a shift lens on film for it... I would choose an emulsion with more contrast for buildings or use some filter for the scene. Anyway it's a great composition I like the image!

12-23-2019, 03:07 AM - 1 Like	#13
nonpigliounoshoot Pentaxian Join Date: Oct 2019 Posts: 735	only slightly underexposed, nice shot.