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08-24-2018, 10:24 AM   #1
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Having fun with film again. Let me know what you guys think.

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08-24-2018, 10:36 AM - 1 Like   #2
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I like it... maybe just a little bit less space in the front to be able to see the upper part of the building at the left. But as I said, I like it, nice shot! Keep it up having fun!

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I like it... maybe just a little bit less space in the front to be able to see the upper part of the building at the left. But as I said, I like it, nice shot! Keep it up having fun!

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Thanks. This is the public library in Vancouver BC, Canada.
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Well done.
I would only change the aspect ratio to 2x3 (croping away the bottom) and maybe rotate the picture by -0,80 so the person in the centre is more vertical.

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I like the people in it; gives it a nice sense of scale.
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Which film did you use? (just curious)
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Which film did you use? (just curious)
Ilford delta 100
08-25-2018, 02:07 PM - 1 Like   #8
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Having fun with film again. Let me know what you guys think.
You might bump up the contrast a little.

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I would only have added 1 more stop of exposure, otherwise not change anything. Though i dont know if you kan change that easily on film camera.
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QuoteOriginally posted by mpslxz Quote
Having fun with film again. Let me know what you guys think.
Lovely image. I like the curves and how they draw you down to the person on the path between the buildings. Well done.
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lovely composition, it is just a bit grey. I think it could use bit more contrast.
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Straightening would help, but you would need a shift lens on film for it... I would choose an emulsion with more contrast for buildings or use some filter for the scene.
Anyway it's a great composition I like the image!
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only slightly underexposed, nice shot.
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