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08-28-2018, 08:03 PM   #16
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Nice pose, and I like how the dark arch frames her head. There's too much headroom for my taste, her face is too close to the center of the photo.

08-28-2018, 08:26 PM   #17
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Okay I hear you!
Recomposed image. I agree it looks better!
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Very nicely done. A beautiful model done justice.
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Nice shot. You could also try cropping the top and right side a bit. That would move the subject a bit to the right and left some space in front of her.

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Yes, I think the later version is IMHO much better, but the lighting, colors, and model are beautiful.

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