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06-28-2019, 05:57 PM - 6 Likes   #1
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Joahna in b/w
Lens: Chinon 50 mm f 1,7 Camera: PENTAX K10D Photo Location: Pyrgos Greece ISO: 200 Shutter Speed: 1/125s Aperture: F3.5 

the shot was taken in an old furniture factory

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Wow, Beautiful!!
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It works well in B&W. Nice shot.
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Lovely model and the choice of location is excellent. Posing is well done. This has a moody, pensive vibe.

A few of things:
* image seems a little dark - perhaps lighten it up a little
* vignette is overly dark - the effect should be subtle, barely noticeable.
* watermark - if you are going to include - make it a bit smaller.

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If it were mine... I'd lift the shadows a bit to put some detail back into the hair and dress, like this
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