[Saul]

Hi

I would be glad to hear any critique on this experimental shot. This is one particular angle of several religious buildings when you can see all of their religious signs together. I Liked silhouettes and lines in the sky background. I also thought that it is good to show a little of roof texture so that dark areas in a picture would not be too boring. But then picture gets depth and the idea of silhouettes is compromised a little. Any comments

I am open to all the critics. Please feel free to write. I am learning.

Thanks
Saulius

p.s. Pentax K20D, DA* 50 - 135mm

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Last edited by Saul; 10-11-2008 at 05:39 AM.

[cupic]

This is a good starting point,may I suggest that next time shot with the sun or light source in the background to heighten this effect


cheers

[JCSullivan]

I'm not much for critique from the technical side of things but I do like the image and the ide behind it.

[woodworm]

I like the image.

I'm not sure what the technical term is, but I would like to darken the sky a little in the background and really try to make the clouds stand out against it.

[sawtooth235]

If you have photoshop or any other editing software with the ability to alter "curves" go in and play with the yellow and or red content to add drama to the clouds and dodge the roof to bring out a little detail.

Hope this helps,

Ray