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bdery · 10-27-2019, 05:34 AM

I like the trails and starbursts. I'm not a fan of the empty space to the bottom right. Maybe you were constrained in your positioning?

TLiivo · 10-27-2019, 03:54 PM

Originally posted by dan.a.nesheim

The light was nice so had to do a quick attempt on long exposure.
This is simply stabilized with a gorillapod wrapped around the railing.

Lovely shot from the underappreciated K-7

krre23 · 10-30-2019, 05:46 PM

Beautiful shot! A little crop could help indeed, thanks for sharing!

Outlander · 10-30-2019, 10:30 PM

nice job

Y.goussyra · 11-04-2019, 08:00 PM

Originally posted by dan.a.nesheim

The light was nice so had to do a quick attempt on long exposure.
This is simply stabilized with a gorillapod wrapped around the railing.

wonderful

z3n1th · 11-05-2019, 03:52 PM

Originally posted by dan.a.nesheim

The light was nice so had to do a quick attempt on long exposure.
This is simply stabilized with a gorillapod wrapped around the railing.

You did a really great job, I really like how you got the light trails. Maybe it would have been even better if you got more light trails, but that would have been possible later, when the natural light would've been weaker.
One thing bothers me a bit, from a compositional point of view: the light bulbs in the upper left attract a bit too much attention, but that can be fixed with a bit of crop. Great job, keep it up!

The Squirrel Mafia · 11-05-2019, 04:02 PM

Looks pretty good to me.

800rate · 11-24-2019, 08:45 AM

very nice

08amczb · 11-26-2019, 08:43 AM

Great image!
Although I would try a tighter vertical crop on the S curved part of the road.

**UncleVanya** · 11-26-2019, 08:45 AM

Great Starbursts! Trails and sky are nice also.

**miguelfenoglio** · 11-26-2019, 09:05 AM

Nicely done. A successful attempt I'd say. I agree with someone who said to crop some of the foreground. Nothing really interesting going on there as the light trails are bearably noticeable anyway.

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10-27-2019, 05:34 AM	#16
bdery Pentaxian Join Date: Mar 2008 Location: Quebec city, Canada Photos: Gallery Posts: 9,363	I like the trails and starbursts. I'm not a fan of the empty space to the bottom right. Maybe you were constrained in your positioning?

10-27-2019, 03:54 PM	#17
TLiivo Senior Member Join Date: Nov 2009 Photos: Gallery Posts: 158	Originally posted by dan.a.nesheim The light was nice so had to do a quick attempt on long exposure. This is simply stabilized with a gorillapod wrapped around the railing. Lovely shot from the underappreciated K-7

10-30-2019, 05:46 PM	#18
krre23 Veteran Member Join Date: Apr 2015 Location: Caracas Photos: Gallery Posts: 540	Beautiful shot! A little crop could help indeed, thanks for sharing!

10-30-2019, 10:30 PM	#19
Outlander Pentaxian Join Date: Mar 2016 Location: Easten Canada Photos: Gallery Posts: 1,148	nice job

11-04-2019, 08:00 PM	#20
Y.goussyra Senior Member Join Date: May 2019 Location: Agadir city -Morocco Photos: Gallery Posts: 210	Originally posted by dan.a.nesheim The light was nice so had to do a quick attempt on long exposure. This is simply stabilized with a gorillapod wrapped around the railing. wonderful

11-05-2019, 03:52 PM	#21
z3n1th New Member Join Date: Apr 2014 Posts: 19	Originally posted by dan.a.nesheim The light was nice so had to do a quick attempt on long exposure. This is simply stabilized with a gorillapod wrapped around the railing. You did a really great job, I really like how you got the light trails. Maybe it would have been even better if you got more light trails, but that would have been possible later, when the natural light would've been weaker. One thing bothers me a bit, from a compositional point of view: the light bulbs in the upper left attract a bit too much attention, but that can be fixed with a bit of crop. Great job, keep it up!

11-05-2019, 04:02 PM	#22
The Squirrel Mafia Pentaxian Join Date: Jan 2015 Posts: 3,058	Looks pretty good to me.

11-24-2019, 08:45 AM	#23
800rate Banned Join Date: Jun 2015 Location: Corpus Christi, Texas Posts: 252	very nice

11-26-2019, 08:43 AM	#24
08amczb Veteran Member Join Date: Dec 2013 Posts: 796	Great image! Although I would try a tighter vertical crop on the S curved part of the road.

11-26-2019, 08:45 AM	#25
UncleVanya Loyal Site Supporter Join Date: Jul 2014 Photos: Gallery \| Albums Posts: 28,472	Great Starbursts! Trails and sky are nice also.

11-26-2019, 09:05 AM	#26
miguelfenoglio Site Supporter Join Date: Jun 2015 Location: Madrid Photos: Gallery Posts: 364	Nicely done. A successful attempt I'd say. I agree with someone who said to crop some of the foreground. Nothing really interesting going on there as the light trails are bearably noticeable anyway.

Night Light trails attempt

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