Forgot Password
Pentax Camera Forums Home
 

Reply
Show Printable Version Search this Thread
12-29-2019, 02:43 PM - 1 Like   #16
Veteran Member




Join Date: May 2011
Location: Oregon
Posts: 365
Nice night capture!

01-07-2020, 08:19 PM   #17
Pentaxian
edom31's Avatar

Join Date: Nov 2017
Location: Garden City, NY
Photos: Gallery
Posts: 6,349
Original Poster
QuoteOriginally posted by pentaxshooter89 Quote
Nice night capture!
thanks!

---------- Post added 01-07-20 at 10:26 PM ----------

QuoteOriginally posted by -JW- Quote
I'm not sure what the point of interest is, my eye gets drawn to the top right blue school sign first, to the roof on the left second.
The top right starburst is also very distracting, I think you would get drawn more into the street if you crop out that and the blue school sign.
One step to the right would potentially also drawn you more into the street.

As a last remarks, the photo is slightly skewed to the left, or at least the buildings on the right are tilting inwards.
Thanks for this feedback - it does get a little confusing, and I really did not have an actual/precise point of interest - I saw that street at midnite and the whole looked intresting as it was so quiet yet so busy.

Tilting might be the lens doing its thing at 35mm (SMC Tak)
01-08-2020, 11:08 AM   #18
Site Supporter
SpottyReputation's Avatar

Join Date: Oct 2019
Location: Abbotsford, BC
Photos: Albums
Posts: 210
The light stars have been rendered very nicely. I like the overall contrast, the wet reflections are nice.
01-08-2020, 11:19 AM   #19
Pentaxian
edom31's Avatar

Join Date: Nov 2017
Location: Garden City, NY
Photos: Gallery
Posts: 6,349
Original Poster
QuoteOriginally posted by SpottyReputation Quote
The light stars have been rendered very nicely. I like the overall contrast, the wet reflections are nice.
thank you kindly - the stars is all about that little gem of a lens!

01-09-2020, 05:03 AM   #20
Senior Member
Y.goussyra's Avatar

Join Date: May 2019
Location: Agadir city -Morocco
Photos: Gallery
Posts: 210
silent !!!
11-14-2020, 10:15 AM   #21
Pentaxian
kjfishman's Avatar

Join Date: Apr 2010
Location: St. Louis
Photos: Gallery | Albums
Posts: 705
Great image. only thing looks a little off parallel and could bestraightened a bit. Otherwise the exposure is spot on and great leading lines.
Reply

Bookmarks
  • Submit Thread to Facebook Facebook
  • Submit Thread to Twitter Twitter
  • Submit Thread to Digg Digg
Tags - Make this thread easier to find by adding keywords to it!
critique, lens, photography, post, school, sign, street, thanks
Thread Tools Search this Thread
Search this Thread:

Advanced Search


Similar Threads
Thread Thread Starter Forum Replies Last Post
Travel Mystic Seaport - L.A. Dunton bearhugs Photo Critique 12 08-31-2018 11:27 AM
Black & White South Street Seaport oculus Post Your Photos! 7 05-24-2015 02:57 PM
Down down down down... innershell Post Your Photos! 5 08-06-2009 05:45 PM
From a small Eastenr Canadian Seaport DrFin Welcomes and Introductions 3 01-25-2009 04:31 PM
goin down, down, down.... craftsmansky Post Your Photos! 4 03-03-2008 02:47 PM



All times are GMT -7. The time now is 04:38 PM. | See also: NikonForums.com, CanonForums.com part of our network of photo forums!
  • Red (Default)
  • Green
  • Gray
  • Dark
  • Dark Yellow
  • Dark Blue
  • Old Red
  • Old Green
  • Old Gray
  • Dial-Up Style
Hello! It's great to see you back on the forum! Have you considered joining the community?
register
Creating a FREE ACCOUNT takes under a minute, removes ads, and lets you post! [Dismiss]
Top