Landscape Vineyard hut

Ginos · 03-03-2021, 01:30 AM - **3 Likes**

**Bruce Clark** · 03-03-2021, 06:00 AM

Excellent detail and colour. I would have liked a bit more open space on the left and perhaps a little less sky. Small criticisms for an other wise good image.

ChristianRock · 03-03-2021, 08:48 AM

I agree with Bruce. The picture is great as it is - the colors and processing are great, but a crop towards a widescreen ratio, taking off a bit of the off-focus grass in the front, and a bit of the extra sky, would look even better.

**MSL** · 03-03-2021, 09:32 AM

I agree with the feedback so far. Just a little more on the left would have helped so you didn't crop the tree. I'd be tempted to shoot from closer to the ground to cut off the sky a bit.

MikeMcE · 03-03-2021, 01:04 PM

I see what’s been said, my eyes see ... too much. I would tighten way up and concentrate on the shed and trees.

But I didn’t shoot this so I can’t say what you saw, only what I see.

Overall it’s an enjoyable image, beautiful natures scene.

Hang up and DRIVE!

Ginos · 03-08-2021, 06:31 AM

Originally posted by Bruce Clark

Excellent detail and colour. Iwould have liked a bit more open space on the left and perhaps a little lesssky. Small criticisms for an other wise good image.

Originally posted by ChristianRock

I agree with Bruce. The pictureis great as it is - the colors and processing are great, but a crop towards awidescreen ratio, taking off a bit of the off-focus grass in the front, and abit of the extra sky, would look even better.

Originally posted by MSL

I agree with the feedback so far. Just alittle more on the left would have helped so you didn't crop the tree. I'd betempted to shoot from closer to the ground to cut off the sky a bit.

Originally posted by MikeMcE

I see what’s been said, my eyessee ... too much. I would tighten way up and concentrate on the shed and trees.
But I didn’t shoot this so I can’t say what you saw, only what I see.
Overall it’s an enjoyable image, beautiful natures scene.
Hang up and DRIVE!

The crop on the left was to cancel the tree that didn't come out whole, and I also took into account a panoramic format to crop the sky (boring) and the grass.

Thank you very much for your comments!

**MSL** · 03-08-2021, 08:22 AM

Originally posted by Ginos

The crop on the left was to cancel the tree that didn't come out whole, and I also took into account a panoramic format to crop the sky (boring) and the grass.

I prefer the uncut version. The small portion of the tree on the left hints towards the row of trees extending out into the distance.

MikeMcE · 03-08-2021, 09:03 AM

Originally posted by MSL

I prefer the uncut version. The small portion of the tree on the left hints towards the row of trees extending out into the distance.

Ditto.... I don’t know why but seems more natural

Hang up and DRIVE!

SpecialK · 03-10-2021, 12:17 AM

I would crop a bit of the sky, and possibly clone out the powerline tower between the trees.

Ginos · 03-12-2021, 04:40 AM - **1 Like**

Originally posted by MSL

I prefer the uncut version. The small portion of the tree on the left hints towards the row of trees extending out into the distance.

---------- Post added 03-12-21 at 04:41 AM ----------

Originally posted by MikeMcE

Ditto.... I don’t know why but seems more natural

---------- Post added 03-12-21 at 04:42 AM ----------

Originally posted by SpecialK

I would crop a bit of the sky, and possibly clone out the powerline tower between the trees.

I prefer to clone - to intervene as little as possible in the image, especially in terms of static elements of the landscape. I always try to integrate them into the "narrative".
This photo is taken in a very urbanized area, it is a part that preserves the rural essence in a very densely populated and industrial area. I like to have some element that reminds us of it.

Thank you very much for your comment!

03-03-2021, 01:30 AM - 3 Likes	#1
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03-03-2021, 06:00 AM	#2
Bruce Clark Loyal Site Supporter Join Date: Mar 2010 Location: Ocean Grove, Victoria Photos: Gallery \| Albums Posts: 4,458	Excellent detail and colour. I would have liked a bit more open space on the left and perhaps a little less sky. Small criticisms for an other wise good image.

03-03-2021, 08:48 AM	#3
ChristianRock Pentaxian Join Date: Jul 2013 Location: People's Republic of America Photos: Gallery \| Albums Posts: 9,910	I agree with Bruce. The picture is great as it is - the colors and processing are great, but a crop towards a widescreen ratio, taking off a bit of the off-focus grass in the front, and a bit of the extra sky, would look even better.

03-03-2021, 09:32 AM	#4
MSL Site Supporter Join Date: Feb 2012 Location: Greater Toronto Area Photos: Gallery \| Albums Posts: 4,749	I agree with the feedback so far. Just a little more on the left would have helped so you didn't crop the tree. I'd be tempted to shoot from closer to the ground to cut off the sky a bit.

03-03-2021, 01:04 PM	#5
MikeMcE Pentaxian Join Date: Jun 2020 Photos: Albums Posts: 1,093	I see what’s been said, my eyes see ... too much. I would tighten way up and concentrate on the shed and trees. But I didn’t shoot this so I can’t say what you saw, only what I see. Overall it’s an enjoyable image, beautiful natures scene. Hang up and DRIVE!

03-08-2021, 06:31 AM	#6
Ginos Senior Member Join Date: May 2017 Location: Vallès Occidental Photos: Gallery Posts: 139 Original Poster	Originally posted by Bruce Clark Excellent detail and colour. Iwould have liked a bit more open space on the left and perhaps a little lesssky. Small criticisms for an other wise good image. Originally posted by ChristianRock I agree with Bruce. The pictureis great as it is - the colors and processing are great, but a crop towards awidescreen ratio, taking off a bit of the off-focus grass in the front, and abit of the extra sky, would look even better. Originally posted by MSL I agree with the feedback so far. Just alittle more on the left would have helped so you didn't crop the tree. I'd betempted to shoot from closer to the ground to cut off the sky a bit. Originally posted by MikeMcE I see what’s been said, my eyessee ... too much. I would tighten way up and concentrate on the shed and trees. But I didn’t shoot this so I can’t say what you saw, only what I see. Overall it’s an enjoyable image, beautiful natures scene. Hang up and DRIVE! The crop on the left was to cancel the tree that didn't come out whole, and I also took into account a panoramic format to crop the sky (boring) and the grass. Thank you very much for your comments!

03-08-2021, 08:22 AM	#7
MSL Site Supporter Join Date: Feb 2012 Location: Greater Toronto Area Photos: Gallery \| Albums Posts: 4,749	Originally posted by Ginos The crop on the left was to cancel the tree that didn't come out whole, and I also took into account a panoramic format to crop the sky (boring) and the grass. I prefer the uncut version. The small portion of the tree on the left hints towards the row of trees extending out into the distance.

03-08-2021, 09:03 AM	#8
MikeMcE Pentaxian Join Date: Jun 2020 Photos: Albums Posts: 1,093	Originally posted by MSL I prefer the uncut version. The small portion of the tree on the left hints towards the row of trees extending out into the distance. Ditto.... I don’t know why but seems more natural Hang up and DRIVE!

03-10-2021, 12:17 AM	#9
SpecialK Pentaxian Join Date: Dec 2006 Location: So California Photos: Gallery Posts: 16,481	I would crop a bit of the sky, and possibly clone out the powerline tower between the trees.

03-12-2021, 04:40 AM - 1 Like	#10
Ginos Senior Member Join Date: May 2017 Location: Vallès Occidental Photos: Gallery Posts: 139 Original Poster	Originally posted by MSL I prefer the uncut version. The small portion of the tree on the left hints towards the row of trees extending out into the distance. ---------- Post added 03-12-21 at 04:41 AM ---------- Originally posted by MikeMcE Ditto.... I don’t know why but seems more natural ---------- Post added 03-12-21 at 04:42 AM ---------- Originally posted by SpecialK I would crop a bit of the sky, and possibly clone out the powerline tower between the trees. I prefer to clone - to intervene as little as possible in the image, especially in terms of static elements of the landscape. I always try to integrate them into the "narrative". This photo is taken in a very urbanized area, it is a part that preserves the rural essence in a very densely populated and industrial area. I like to have some element that reminds us of it. Thank you very much for your comment!