First one, I have nothing to add. It's really beautiful. At most, maybe bring the camera down a bit and point it just a smidge further up to have a bit of sky at the top of the frame? Might give a bit more context...
For the second, at least on my screen it looks like the focus is on the right-hand side bulb that is a bit behind the others; I would have
personally preferred the focus to be on the left bulbs since they "pop out" more from the background and I feel it would make the image stand out more. Pulling the focus plane closer might have made the foreground leaf on the right also look a bit less busy (which is truly the only nitpick I have lens-wise - the first shot's bokeh is creamy all over).
Don't worry too much about sharpness - macro has very thin DoF as you have probably noticed while focusing, so nailing it is complicated the moment there's a breeze of wind, and you've done a great work. Very nice detail on the focal plane
Keep at it!
Last edited by Serkevan; 06-18-2021 at 06:04 AM.