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06-05-2022, 10:39 PM   #1
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Awesome Looking Floral Photograph. :)
Lens: Canon EF-S 55~250mm, IS, STM Lens Camera: Canon EOS 7D Mark II Photo Location: My Living Room ISO: 6400 Shutter Speed: 1/10s Aperture: F5 

Manual Exposure Mode with CWA Metering.

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06-17-2022, 06:15 AM   #2
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Critique nook, so... Old rule says - remove what shift attention away from main object - bent down/out twigs, buds, straws, grass, whatever. Even cutting them away is admissible, isn't it.
Then center the focus, eyes should rest in bliss, not run around. So, the bud-pointers drag the dark(ness) from the left into the composition. What's the "hidden thing" it pulls into view? Void? Good question, but was anxiety of eyes and mind the deliberate result, was it?
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I would also add that this photo is amazing. Stunningly poorly shot. Poor composition, white balance, ISO.
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QuoteOriginally posted by veraser Quote
Critique nook, so... Old rule says - remove what shift attention away from main object - bent down/out twigs, buds, straws, grass, whatever. Even cutting them away is admissible, isn't it.
Then center the focus, eyes should rest in bliss, not run around. So, the bud-pointers drag the dark(ness) from the left into the composition. What's the "hidden thing" it pulls into view? Void? Good question, but was anxiety of eyes and mind the deliberate result, was it?
I'm afraid I do not understand all of your comment. My only goal was to obtain a second or even third opinion on this image since so many other shooters in other photo sites

had offered many praises, votes and awards. I see you live in a different country, so there are no hard feelings and I appreciate your taking the time and making a sincere

effort to be helpful. Many thanks.

Tony

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QuoteOriginally posted by Fdooch Quote
I would also add that this photo is amazing. Stunningly poorly shot. Poor composition, white balance, ISO.
I would respond to your comment in the same manner I responded to the comment made above, although yours appears to be a bit harsh, I was only seeking another opinion.

If you had seen the subject first hand, you would observe its natural beauty and amazing appeal. I mean it was begging to be photographed. In addition, as above, many

thanks for taking the time to be helpful and informative. Hope this finds you well.

Regards,

Tony

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