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aki · 08-13-2022, 03:17 AM - **1 Like**

Hello ! New to the forum and first post, holiday photo in the Pyrenees. What do you think . Cheers

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**rhanz** · 08-13-2022, 08:31 AM

Originally posted by aki

Hello ! New to the forum and first post, holiday photo in the Pyrenees. What do you think . Cheers

welcome to the site, A very nice picture.

**robgski** · 08-13-2022, 01:08 PM - **1 Like**

Welcome to the forum!

the brightest and most eye-catching parts of this scene are the rock faces and ridge cutting across the sky, and the clouds make the sky interesting.
The small light colored houses stand out from the cloud shadow and add a sense of scale.
Overall exposure it good.
If you had taken 3-4 steps to your left, you would have had a better scene of peaks and clouds without the right side foreground being obscured by a slope. and a few steps backward would allow you to get the left side of the ridge and peaks.
As composed, cropping a bit more off the left and the right would emphasize the vertical heights and scale of the scene.

C_Jones · 08-13-2022, 01:13 PM

Nice shot.

**mroeder75** · 08-13-2022, 10:51 PM

My personal preference would be for a bit more clarity and contrast. The photo is very nice. Welcome aboard. I am an amateur.

**PJ1** · 08-13-2022, 11:50 PM

Interesting shot. I would love to do some hiking in the Pyrenees. And welcome to the Forums.

aki · 08-14-2022, 01:34 AM

Originally posted by robgski

Welcome to the forum!

the brightest and most eye-catching parts of this scene are the rock faces and ridge cutting across the sky, and the clouds make the sky interesting.
The small light colored houses stand out from the cloud shadow and add a sense of scale.
Overall exposure it good.
If you had taken 3-4 steps to your left, you would have had a better scene of peaks and clouds without the right side foreground being obscured by a slope. and a few steps backward would allow you to get the left side of the ridge and peaks.
As composed, cropping a bit more off the left and the right would emphasize the vertical heights and scale of the scene.

Hi , thanks , the composition was difficult to do because i had only a 35 mm and the land more irregularities that i could not stay were i wanted for the precipites

---------- Post added 08-14-22 at 01:34 AM ----------

Originally posted by PJ1

Interesting shot. I would love to do some hiking in the Pyrenees. And welcome to the Forums.

thanks , it is so pretty

---------- Post added 08-14-22 at 01:36 AM ----------

Originally posted by mroeder75

My personal preference would be for a bit more clarity and contrast. The photo is very nice. Welcome aboard. I am an amateur.

thanks

**mroeder75** · 08-14-2022, 09:20 PM

Incidentally, most of my picture posts are shared here from my Flickr page, and by doing so here can click on your image and see your full-sized image and then we may see the greater clarity in your full-size image, and that my above comments may be entirely irrelevant; it is a beautiful image.

aki · 08-15-2022, 01:51 AM

Originally posted by mroeder75

Incidentally, most of my picture posts are shared here from my Flickr page, and by doing so here can click on your image and see your full-sized image and then we may see the greater clarity in your full-size image, and that my above comments may be entirely irrelevant; it is a beautiful image.

All the comments of my picture are welcomed , but sometimes i have not times to write because i am thinking about what people said . This pic was taken a brightly day , with more sun anf few contrast , in fact i put more contrast than it was . And i don not know what say about clarity,....perphaps yes or no ........I think about Flickr ......

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rhanz Loyal Site Supporter Join Date: Jul 2016 Photos: Gallery \| Albums Posts: 1,984	Originally posted by aki Hello ! New to the forum and first post, holiday photo in the Pyrenees. What do you think . Cheers welcome to the site, A very nice picture.

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robgski Loyal Site Supporter Join Date: Nov 2012 Location: Shenandoah Valley, Virginia Photos: Gallery \| Albums Posts: 8,817	Welcome to the forum! the brightest and most eye-catching parts of this scene are the rock faces and ridge cutting across the sky, and the clouds make the sky interesting. The small light colored houses stand out from the cloud shadow and add a sense of scale. Overall exposure it good. If you had taken 3-4 steps to your left, you would have had a better scene of peaks and clouds without the right side foreground being obscured by a slope. and a few steps backward would allow you to get the left side of the ridge and peaks. As composed, cropping a bit more off the left and the right would emphasize the vertical heights and scale of the scene.

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C_Jones Pentaxian Join Date: Sep 2012 Location: NY Photos: Gallery \| Albums Posts: 6,077	Nice shot.

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PJ1 Loyal Site Supporter Join Date: Jul 2012 Location: Toowoomba, Australia Photos: Gallery \| Albums Posts: 5,486	Interesting shot. I would love to do some hiking in the Pyrenees. And welcome to the Forums.

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aki Junior Member Join Date: Dec 2019 Posts: 44 Original Poster	Originally posted by robgski Welcome to the forum! the brightest and most eye-catching parts of this scene are the rock faces and ridge cutting across the sky, and the clouds make the sky interesting. The small light colored houses stand out from the cloud shadow and add a sense of scale. Overall exposure it good. If you had taken 3-4 steps to your left, you would have had a better scene of peaks and clouds without the right side foreground being obscured by a slope. and a few steps backward would allow you to get the left side of the ridge and peaks. As composed, cropping a bit more off the left and the right would emphasize the vertical heights and scale of the scene. Hi , thanks , the composition was difficult to do because i had only a 35 mm and the land more irregularities that i could not stay were i wanted for the precipites ---------- Post added 08-14-22 at 01:34 AM ---------- Originally posted by PJ1 Interesting shot. I would love to do some hiking in the Pyrenees. And welcome to the Forums. thanks , it is so pretty ---------- Post added 08-14-22 at 01:36 AM ---------- Originally posted by mroeder75 My personal preference would be for a bit more clarity and contrast. The photo is very nice. Welcome aboard. I am an amateur. thanks

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mroeder75 Site Supporter Join Date: Sep 2014 Location: Iowa Photos: Gallery Posts: 1,601	Incidentally, most of my picture posts are shared here from my Flickr page, and by doing so here can click on your image and see your full-sized image and then we may see the greater clarity in your full-size image, and that my above comments may be entirely irrelevant; it is a beautiful image.

08-15-2022, 01:51 AM	#9
aki Junior Member Join Date: Dec 2019 Posts: 44 Original Poster	Originally posted by mroeder75 Incidentally, most of my picture posts are shared here from my Flickr page, and by doing so here can click on your image and see your full-sized image and then we may see the greater clarity in your full-size image, and that my above comments may be entirely irrelevant; it is a beautiful image. All the comments of my picture are welcomed , but sometimes i have not times to write because i am thinking about what people said . This pic was taken a brightly day , with more sun anf few contrast , in fact i put more contrast than it was . And i don not know what say about clarity,....perphaps yes or no ........I think about Flickr ......