Landscape Kaia

aki · 08-13-2022, 04:09 AM - **2 Likes**

Different opinions into my friends with this pic . Whats about this picture ?

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gatorguy · 08-13-2022, 04:47 AM

Lovely processing.

I would personally have stood a few feet to the left and angled the camera a bit more towards the landside. IMO the composition doesn't feel quite right, but if the primary goal was the symmetry of the rock debris and not a landscape per se there's nothing wrong with your staging either. I think what's distracting is my eye wants to include the nicely colored sun and the sky surrounding, but the straight on rock path isn't allowing it.

aki · 08-13-2022, 07:29 AM

Originally posted by gatorguy

Lovely processing.

I would personally have stood a few feet to the left and angled the camera a bit more towards the landside. IMO the composition doesn't feel quite right, but if the primary goal was the symmetry of the rock debris and not a landscape per se there's nothing wrong with your staging either. I think what's distracting is my eye wants to include the nicely colored sun and the sky surrounding, but the straight on rock path isn't allowing it.

Thanks a lot , it is a nice place who frequently visit , and at this time i went to take the symmetry but it is a pity that the sun did not was in the middle of the action

**robgski** · 08-13-2022, 12:59 PM

Good leading lines into the scene.
Since the elements at each edge are a little soft and add nothing to the image, a slightly tighter crop with the same aspect ratio would make for a stronger image.

aki · 08-14-2022, 01:45 AM

Originally posted by robgski

Good leading lines into the scene.
Since the elements at each edge are a little soft and add nothing to the image, a slightly tighter crop with the same aspect ratio would make for a stronger image.

yes , it is one option that i do with the 18 mm

**othar** · 08-14-2022, 03:04 PM

It's a pitty the leading lines don't actually lead somewhere, preferably the sun.
In this case I'd go for a square crop with the sun in the middle

aki · 08-15-2022, 01:54 AM

Originally posted by othar

It's a pitty the leading lines don't actually lead somewhere, preferably the sun.
In this case I'd go for a square crop with the sun in the middle

So interesting , it is other way i did not explore

08-13-2022, 04:47 AM	#2
gatorguy Moderator Join Date: Feb 2015 Location: Central Florida Photos: Gallery Posts: 6,092	Lovely processing. I would personally have stood a few feet to the left and angled the camera a bit more towards the landside. IMO the composition doesn't feel quite right, but if the primary goal was the symmetry of the rock debris and not a landscape per se there's nothing wrong with your staging either. I think what's distracting is my eye wants to include the nicely colored sun and the sky surrounding, but the straight on rock path isn't allowing it.

08-13-2022, 07:29 AM	#3
aki Junior Member Join Date: Dec 2019 Posts: 44 Original Poster	Originally posted by gatorguy Lovely processing. I would personally have stood a few feet to the left and angled the camera a bit more towards the landside. IMO the composition doesn't feel quite right, but if the primary goal was the symmetry of the rock debris and not a landscape per se there's nothing wrong with your staging either. I think what's distracting is my eye wants to include the nicely colored sun and the sky surrounding, but the straight on rock path isn't allowing it. Thanks a lot , it is a nice place who frequently visit , and at this time i went to take the symmetry but it is a pity that the sun did not was in the middle of the action

08-13-2022, 12:59 PM	#4
robgski Loyal Site Supporter Join Date: Nov 2012 Location: Shenandoah Valley, Virginia Photos: Gallery \| Albums Posts: 8,793	Good leading lines into the scene. Since the elements at each edge are a little soft and add nothing to the image, a slightly tighter crop with the same aspect ratio would make for a stronger image.

08-14-2022, 01:45 AM	#5
aki Junior Member Join Date: Dec 2019 Posts: 44 Original Poster	Originally posted by robgski Good leading lines into the scene. Since the elements at each edge are a little soft and add nothing to the image, a slightly tighter crop with the same aspect ratio would make for a stronger image. yes , it is one option that i do with the 18 mm

08-15-2022, 01:54 AM	#7
aki Junior Member Join Date: Dec 2019 Posts: 44 Original Poster	Originally posted by othar It's a pitty the leading lines don't actually lead somewhere, preferably the sun. In this case I'd go for a square crop with the sun in the middle So interesting , it is other way i did not explore

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