Still Life -

jbevans · 01-25-2009, 11:26 PM

I needed a still life image and didn't like any I had done so did this today. What do you think?

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Last edited by jbevans; 01-27-2009 at 02:48 PM. Reason: Wanted a more specific title

Taff · 01-26-2009, 06:22 AM

very well done on the selective focus

jbevans · 01-30-2009, 07:47 PM

Here is an updated version that includes some of the suggested improvements.
Please comment. Thanks.

foto-bear · 01-30-2009, 08:50 PM

I think the background texture is distracting and too close in colour tone to the shoes. Maybe cropping tighter will also be help

Taff · 02-01-2009, 04:22 AM

the shoes are now floating, but thanks on the acknowledgment on my previous comment

01-25-2009, 11:26 PM	#1
jbevans Inactive Account Join Date: Oct 2008 Location: Oregon coast Photos: Gallery Posts: 30	Still Life - my shoes Lens: 50mm Camera: K10d ISO: 200 Shutter Speed: --- Aperture: --- I needed a still life image and didn't like any I had done so did this today. What do you think? Attached Images Last edited by jbevans; 01-27-2009 at 02:48 PM. Reason: Wanted a more specific title

01-30-2009, 07:47 PM	#3
jbevans Inactive Account Join Date: Oct 2008 Location: Oregon coast Photos: Gallery Posts: 30 Original Poster	My shoes - still life Here is an updated version that includes some of the suggested improvements. Please comment. Thanks. Attached Images

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01-26-2009, 06:22 AM	#2
Taff Veteran Member Join Date: Aug 2008 Location: Perth Western Australia Photos: Gallery \| Albums Posts: 1,612	very well done on the selective focus

01-30-2009, 08:50 PM	#4
foto-bear New Member Join Date: Jan 2009 Location: Bowen Island Photos: Gallery Posts: 4	I think the background texture is distracting and too close in colour tone to the shoes. Maybe cropping tighter will also be help

02-01-2009, 04:22 AM	#5
Taff Veteran Member Join Date: Aug 2008 Location: Perth Western Australia Photos: Gallery \| Albums Posts: 1,612	the shoes are now floating, but thanks on the acknowledgment on my previous comment

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